Reviews For Velvet
Reviewer: Madcrazychick Signed Date: 06/29/05 - 11:13PM Title: Chapter 6

Glad to see you're back with an update for this. But hot diggity damn, girl! Justin comes in and I'm all anxious to hear what he's going to say and then the parents come busting in a day early and the whole time Kel's mom is talking with Justin and I'm like 'please don't let Maggie come home yet' and then I was hoping that somehow Justin would have found the time and most importantly space to tell Kel what he wanted to say. But noooo, in comes Maggie. Then comes Kel out of the closet to her parents. That must have been completely awkward for Justin...feel so bad for Kel, I was hoping that at least her dad would have some kind of sympathy for her. But I guess not. Maybe later though? Once it sinks in a little. And oh yeah, Justin's not with Allison anymore...good stuff. :D lol About the only 'good' thing that happened in the chapter. lol Update soon! You got me hooked for sure.

Author's Response: You predicted that breakup, didn't you? LOL, love how it's considered a "good" thing. But yes, a lot of not so good things happened in that chapter. And her father... *shakes head* I think it's obvious who wears the pants in that family. And an update is coming as we speak.


Reviewer: Amy Anonymous Date: 06/29/05 - 10:32PM Title: Chapter 6

I know there needs to be drama, but HOT damn I wanted Kel to jump into Justin's arms and tell her parent's she loves him instead. Regardless. This is a good story. And, your sex scenes are hot hot hot.

Author's Response: Damn girl, you're quick. LOL. It probably would've been a lot easier on her if she had. But life is certainly not drama-free, so alas, I gotta give this story some juice. But thank you. I like writing sex scenes. Maybe too much. Ha!


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 06/17/05 - 09:12AM Title: Author's Note - Please Read First

LISA. WHERE THE FUCK ARE YOU? Have you fallen from the face of planet earth again? You best be asnwering my reviews soon, or e-mailing me. And I best see a review from your ass on my new chapter. OH AND YES, you BEST update your site soon. LOL. Is that enough demands for now? I guess so. I'lll come back with more later....AND ONCE AGAIN, where the HELL are you???!!!!!!!!!!!!! :( :(

Author's Response: I'm here. I emailed you. AND I updated the site. So there. *sticks tongue out* Write me back!


Reviewer: nini22 Anonymous Date: 06/14/05 - 09:46PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh my, oh my lol. I can just imagine how hot this chapter could have been if no objections had been spoken. The little bit we did get was hot though

Author's Response: I'm sorry to have left you disappointed. I promise to make it up to you soon.


Reviewer: Tasha Anonymous Date: 06/14/05 - 11:21AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh, almost. I don't mean to encourage infidelity because it's wrong but I'm going to make an exception in this case and do it anyway. I want Kelly and Justin to get it on. As soon as possible. Please and thank you. Very, very good chapter. Please keep it coming.

Author's Response: LOL. That seems to be the general concensus around here. You naughty people, you. Thank you, though. And I'll see if I can work on that request. ;)


Reviewer: Amy Anonymous Date: 06/13/05 - 05:02PM Title: Chapter 5

First, congrats on graduating college! Second, OH MY GOD! I actually starting tearing up when Kelly told Justin they couldn't see each other anymore. Third, I NEED MORE!

Author's Response: Thank you! You guys are awesome. And you wanted more, you got it.


Reviewer: Timberlake Anonymous Date: 06/12/05 - 06:24PM Title: Chapter 5

Graduated, huh? Awesome. So many years in school and now it's over. Wow. I can't even imagine what that's like. The chapter, my dear, was so damn hot. I feel so bad for her though. She's so confused and I would be too. Whatever stability she thought she had is falling apart because she met Justin's Timberlicious ass, lol. Breaks my heart when somebody's lost. But Kel didn't have to give up on the friendship. I can definitely understand her reasoning though. It's better safe than sorry, I suppose. They were so close to getting it in though, LOL! So disappointing, lol. And you're welcome for the noms. You're definitely getting my vote, Lisa ;)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. That's really sweet of you. It's definitely weird to be done with school. It's like I don't even know what to do with myself. And yeah, Kel stability is definitely crumbling. But Justin will do that to you, hehe. It's hard to be friends with someone when you can't trust yourself around them. It does suck that it had to end, though. Also, thank you for your vote. I really appreciate that.


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 06/12/05 - 04:13PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh yeah, congrats on your nominations!! You're up against me I think, so I'll of course be voting for your ass! You will win I'm sure!! YOU BETTER. hehe. whoo LOL. Love ya much.....


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 06/12/05 - 04:09PM Title: Chapter 5

Hey sweety, oh my god! I miss you!! There's so much shit I must tell you. I haven't e-mailed you lately though, cus I'm just a lazy fucker like that. You know how I am!! I saw your new email address them. I'M SO PROUD OF YOUF OR GRADUATING. You go girl! That's my smart bitch! Ahaha loves it. You're gonna be so successful, you smart girl you!! I want you to write!! You know I think you should be a professional author, ;) wink wink. Anyways....get your ass on AIM someday. Me and that bitch I told you about--well, we ain't friends anymore. She did something ELSE to me, but I'll explain later. OK ahem, this is a story review Jess. LMAO. I liked the chapter...as always. Maggie and Kel don't belong together...HAHA, (Of course I would say this) But if she's planning on cheating, then you know she may as well break it off. Cheaters suck!! LOL. But she still should have boned Justin, SO HELL. I don't know!! Shambles!! haha. Can't wait till ya update again. OMG, btw, it soOO sucks that our stories got deleted at JJB. Talk about pain in the ass. I don't even know if I'll have the energy to repost. *SIGH* Have you been keepin' up on my story, slut! You never contact me!! GOSH!! *tears* Well I hope everything is okay for you. I LOOOOOOOOVE YOU. Ttyl.

Author's Response: Girl, you're crazy, but I love you anyway. Did you get my response to that email you sent me? Anyway, thanks for the congrats on my graduation. I appreciate it. Oh, and I love how you're all, "Cheaters suck! Sleep with him, Kel!" LMAO. And yeah, I see you were able to get back onto JJB. That's good. Your story is still there. i don't know if mine is; I haven't checked, but it's old, so it doesn't matter. So, write me back. And I love you too, my dear. *big sloppy kiss*


Reviewer: Lola Anonymous Date: 06/11/05 - 06:11PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm a new reading your story, and I love it. This story is very unique and different, I've never read anything like it which is a very good thing. It's very refreshing. Anyway, I loved it And I hope that you update soon.

Author's Response: I always love new readers. Thank you so much for your thoughts. I appreciate the compliment.





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