Reviews For Velvet
Reviewer: Madcrazychick Signed Date: 06/11/05 - 05:39PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow...I didn't realize I'd written that much. I'm a loser. lol

Author's Response: Aww, no you're not. :)


Reviewer: Madcrazychick Signed Date: 06/11/05 - 05:37PM Title: Chapter 5

I was just thinking about how it's been a minute since you've updated this and then I checked back here real quick and here is a new update! lol At the end of the chapter I realized how much Justin says 'I'm sorry.' lol Just a lil' observation, I'm not saying it's a good or bad thing...it just is. And in their situation it's kinda of expected though. And when she first said she wanted to pose for him my eyebrow raised cause it wasn't like they were already lacking sexual tension...without her getting naked to add some in. And she's definitely changed...sneaking around every chance she can get. But who wouldn't for some Timberlovin' though? lol But she used to be all about Maggie and now Maggie's kinda been pushed to the background. The thing that would have bothered me the most if I were her wasn't that I'd almost had sex with him again would have been I wasn't the one who stopped it before we went all the way. That I'd allowed myself to get that caught up that I needed him to remind me that I was already with someone. *shrugs* But that's just me. And it was kinda surprising that him and Ally don't live together. Aren't they engaged? If they want their independence so much then marriage obviously ain't in their near (or far lol) future. And what is in their future? ... Madcrazypsychic says...'a breakup.' Hmmm, looks like I'm gonna have to do some re-reading on that though. I can't remember where I heard it from but I heard that cheating is doing anything that you wouldn't feel comfortable doing when your significant other is standing right there with you. So under that definition she was cheating long before clothes were shed. But now since she almost cheated in the way that most people would define as cheating, I'm wondering if she's gonna come clean with Maggie. Or if she'll just avoid him and think that's good enough. And if she does try to avoid him, I bet something is gonna happen to force the two of them to see each other and to make it worse Justin might be with Ally and she'll be with Maggie when they meet again. Hmmm...that would interesting. lol I'm just rambling now...don't mind me. But then I'm sure any way you write it will be interesting too. Update soon, otay? :)

Author's Response: First of all, wow. You sure had a lot to say. I love it. These kind of responses make me happy. It shows that you're really Into the story. Kel did allow herself to get too caught up in her emotions to such an extent that Maggie wasn't entering her thoughts. I do think that was one of the reasons she was so upset with herself. And actually, Ally and Justin aren't engaged yet. But if it were up to their parents, they would be. That's one of the problems between them, the pressure from their families to be married despite their recent issues. I agree with that defintion of cheating, too. They definitely haven't been faithful to their partners in my eyes. I love hearing your thoughts, so never apologize for rambling. The feedback I get from my readers always affects my vision for the stories and what I do with them, which is a good thing.


Reviewer: Kitty Anonymous Date: 06/11/05 - 05:31PM Title: Chapter 5

I second what Hollie and Broken_soul said. Kel and J jus need 2 get it on already. Please update soon

Author's Response: That seems to be the general concensus. LOL


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 06/11/05 - 04:26PM Title: Chapter 5

She knew she was playing with fire asking him to do that, as did he when he decided to crawl on top of her so unnecessarily. Normally I'd be rolling my eyes and telling them they're both jerks, but dammit I want them to get it on already... man, I have issues *lol*

Author's Response: Oh, but of course. They're definitely idiots, the both of them. LOL. But hey, if you have issues, then I don't even want to *know* what I have. Ha!


Reviewer: broken_souL Anonymous Date: 06/11/05 - 04:05PM Title: Chapter 5

NOOOOO! Have sex goddamnit! Update soon!

Author's Response: LMAO. Tell me how you really feel. I'll get on that. The update, that is. Heh.


Reviewer: Fionnuala Signed Date: 05/24/05 - 08:13PM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story so far. It's really different and interesting. Not a topic I've ever seen covered in N Sync fan fiction before. Good job so far and keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I like different. Different is good. I hope you continue to enjoy it so much.


Reviewer: Gracie Anonymous Date: 05/22/05 - 12:13PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, LOVE the story so far! It's sooo hot! lol, I can definatly see some major drama coming on...update soon!

Author's Response: Awesome! Thanks for responding. And yes, definitely drama to come.


Reviewer: Amy Anonymous Date: 05/17/05 - 09:53PM Title: Chapter 4

The gallery, riiiiiiight. Just friend's, okkkkkkkkkkkkayyyyyyyyy. Bring on the juicy stuff, girl! We can take it.

Author's Response: Haha. I'm sure you can.


Reviewer: Timberlake Signed Date: 05/16/05 - 02:06PM Title: Chapter 4

Yeah, she wants to check out more than Justin's at gallery. .. LOL. I can see it coming, the drama, baby. Lies. Arguments. Intense confrontations. I cannot wait for this "friendship" to bloom into something else and be revealed. So intriguing!

Author's Response: Haha. Don't we all? I can definitely see that you're all about the drama. Don't worry...it's a coming!


Reviewer: Tasha Anonymous Date: 05/16/05 - 01:57PM Title: Chapter 4

I was waiting for an update on your other story and discovered this one. As long as you're updating something it's cool with me. This one is very unique and different, I've never read anything like it which is a very good thing. It's very refreshing, all of your stuff is actually. Anyway, I loved it (of course). And I hope that you update something soon.

Author's Response: I'm sorry I haven't updated my other story in a while, but I'm glad you like this one, too. Yeah, it is different, I think. I've never read anything like this either, and that's why I wanted to write it. Thanks so much for sticking with me through all my stories and through my periods of not updating. You kick ass, Tasha!





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