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Reviewer: glitter15
Signed
Date: 05/16/05 - 12:39PM
Title: Chapter 4
Sooo---she's not gonna ever tell her parents, b/c her and Maggie are gonna break up and she's gonna get with Justin, right? LOL. Okay, just kiddin' bitch......lmao, don't mind me. Secreeeeeeeet loversssssss....hahah, ok so next time her and J meet they are gonna fuck right? =) Ohhhhh the drama, I love it! Awesome-ness. Sorry this isn't a better review, I'm a little out of it. *You would not BELIEVE the drama, Lisa. OMG...my FRIEND backstabbed me!! UGH I HATE THE SLUT I'll tell you about it later I suppose....not that I'm BITTER or anything whew, ok that wasn't part of your review...but i just needed to let that out, i guess LMAO* okay so yeah LOL great cheapter. update soon my dearrrr.
Author's Response: LMAO. Jess, you are crazy. Yes you are. I love your little ramblings. They make me smile. And about the drama, yeah. I got your email. I'll let you know my thoughts on it. *hug*
Reviewer: Melanie
Anonymous
Date: 05/16/05 - 08:44AM
Title: Chapter 4
The story is absolutely amazing! I'm really loving it so far! Keep up the amazing work, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate the kind words.
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 05/16/05 - 06:25AM
Title: Chapter 4
Oohh, wait, I remembered what else I was going to say! I liked how Justin and the girlfriend in the picture and the race issue is so similar to what Kel's feeling regarding her parents and Maggie...something to bond over maybe?? But you rock, yeah
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it'd be interesting to add that little bit, not only as a connection for the characters, but also as a commentary of sorts on the state of the world today. It's kind of...sad, for lack of a better word. But thank you, my dear. You rock, too.
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 05/16/05 - 06:24AM
Title: Chapter 4
Madcrazychick already said what I was gonna say... except her way of saying it was much more interesting than mine so... yeah. Ditto *lol*
Reviewer: Krissy
Anonymous
Date: 05/16/05 - 04:13AM
Title: Chapter 4
Wow I just saw this story, and realized you wrote it, so I just had to read it. Let me tell you I wasn't disappointed, this is great. I like the fact that it's different from other stuff that's out there. It's really well written, and it got me all hot, damn. I look forward to the next chapter, I suspect Kel isn't as immune to the sexiness that is Mr Timberlake as she would have us believe. Update soon, please.
Author's Response: I'm flattered that you read it because you saw that I'd written it. That means a lot to me, so thank you. And I'm glad you weren't disappointed. This story is a first for me in a lot of different ways, so I'm happy that people are responsive to it.
Reviewer: priscilla
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/05 - 08:16PM
Title: Author's Note - Please Read First
Wow. Just wow. I mean you did a really good job here. I hope you continue writing this, its just so good. Oh, and i love your other story "Where I Belong." Both of those are just amazing. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! And don't worry, I plan to. I'm glad you enjoy my other story as well. I appreciate the feedback and hope you keep reading both of them. :)
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/05 - 08:01PM
Title: Chapter 3
Damn, how dare she not let him get off? LOL. OMG, Kel wants her some more of that Timberlickable lovin'. Shit, who wouldn't? That was extremely hot and they both want each other. Kel, get out of the denial process.
Author's Response: She was wrong for that one, huh? And yeah, I know for sure I would. LOL. Thanks for commenting on each chapter as you go along. It's cool to see the progression of thoughts as you go through the story...
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 05/15/05 - 07:43PM
Title: Chapter 4
First it's the little secret of them meeting up once. Then it's the little secret rendezvouses that leads to the little secret affair that leads to the not so little or so secret affair being revealed when either Allison or Maggie find out about it. Maybe she is really ashamed of who she is, or maybe she'll turn out to be the Anne Heche to Maggie's Ellen Degeneres. Dun, dun, dun...lol Either way, it should be interesting. Can't wait 'til the next update. :)
Author's Response: Well, I don't want to say too much, but I like how your mind works. LOL. One lie always leads to the next one, huh? I love hearing your thoughts, and I hope you continue to leave them.
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/05 - 07:40PM
Title: Chapter 2
That's sad that Allison's sick. Aw, breaks my heart. I'm surprised Justin didn't want to go through with this, but now that it's happening, I'm freaking out, LOL. I can't wait to go on to the next chapter. . .
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/05 - 07:24PM
Title: Chapter 1
Whoa, I would never let my man do that, lol. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: Ha! Me either. Thanks!
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