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Reviewer: Ivonne-Marie
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/05 - 03:56PM
Title: Author's Note - Please Read First
holy... crap... thats all i need to say. write more.
Author's Response: I'll take that as a good thing. LOL. I added another chapter. Hope you enjoy. And thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 05/14/05 - 02:29AM
Title: Chapter 3
Okay, so, dammit, my feedback for this chapter wound up next to the author's note for some strange reason!!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 05/14/05 - 02:27AM
Title: Author's Note - Please Read First
I suspect something deeper going on with Allison and this whole thing - both that she thought it up and railroaded him into it, and that she suddenly had a hissy fit in the middle of it. Honestly, you wonder why people do these things when it's just asking for trouble!!! More soon please!
Author's Response: Yeah, people can be not too smart sometimes. But hey, it adds drama, right? And what good is a story without that? Thanks for commenting, Hollie!
Reviewer: Amy
Anonymous
Date: 05/13/05 - 05:28PM
Title: Chapter 3
You have got to be the best visual writer I have ever witnessed. *starts looking for the hubby to unload this sexual tension on*
Oh, yea. And, please update while I go get busy. *wink wink*
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the compliment! I wish I had a hubby to unload my sexual tension on. Ha! I'll try to get a new chapter up soon. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Amy
Anonymous
Date: 05/13/05 - 04:36PM
Title: Chapter 2
Ahhhhhhhh! This is so nerve wracking! WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN? Oh wait. The next chapter is up... here I go. (Great story so far if you couldn't tell by my reaction).
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 05/13/05 - 02:17PM
Title: Chapter 3
That was so hot. Goddamn! Now I wanna go have sex. Shit, damn you for making me horny! Anyway, I love this plot, it's so original and unique. I guessing that Kel really isn't a hard core lesbian if she misses a penis. I want them to hook up already. I also would like a huge break scene between Kel and Maggie. I am such a drama queen :). Great job once again!
Author's Response: I know how you feel. I make myself horny just writing shit like this. LOL. And yeah...I think the point is just that Kel's confused. She doesn't know how she feels. But don't worry. There'll be drama, I promise. I'm glad you like it so much. Thanks so much for your comments!
Reviewer: wicca
Anonymous
Date: 05/13/05 - 12:49PM
Title: Author's Note - Please Read First
man this story is great,great,great,GREAT.totaly awesome.I just love it.it's very unique.I really want to know what's gonna happen.very fantastic situation.
Author's Response: Awesome! I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. I always try to think up unique situations because I know those are the type of stories I myself like to read. Thanks so much for the feedback, and I'll try to get more up soon.
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 05/13/05 - 11:29AM
Title: Chapter 3
Aw sookie-sookie now!!!! I knew it...but I didn't know it would be like THAT. Wow. Even Maggie doubts her, but wait, I thought that they were just fooling around. Poor Justin. If I was Kelaina (which is a creatively cool name, she should like it *lol*), I would've went into the bahroom to help him finish once Allison stormed out.
Author's Response: Ha! You and me both, you and me both. LOL. And yeah, I rather like Kelaina myself, but eh...no talking any sense into that girl. And I think Maggie is just kind of unsure what to think. They were just having fun, but I think Allison's little outburst put some doubt in her mind. Anyway, thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts! I love to know what people think. :)
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 05/13/05 - 11:01AM
Title: Chapter 1
Hmm, this story is very intriging. Wait, so do Kel and Justin ho...wait, maybe I should read the rest first.
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 05/13/05 - 10:09AM
Title: Chapter 3
Oh she knows she wants Justin. After all that, how couldn't she?! lol Hmmm, but I couldn't be Allison, I don't know how she sat there for as long as she did. I understand about her vagini-thang but still I couldn't sit there and watch my man - who happens to be Justin Timberlake no less - sexing two girls whilst I sit and watch. Oh hell no. And if she does start to really like Justin, how messed up is that going to be for her relationship with her best friend?! She might not even have a best friend because of that. Update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, the whole situation is really messed up, and that's why I love it. And I totally feel you on that Allison thing. She had a lot of restraint. But she's just not all there to begin with if she thought she could delude herself into being ok with it. LOL. Thanks for reading and commenting. I really appreciate your thoughts because I wasn't sure what people think of this whole premise. I'll try to update ASAP!
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