Reviewer: TeenySignedDate: 08/21/06 - 04:46PM
Title: Breaking Point
Very intense! Definitely a lot of is "she really going to...no, she wouldn't...be she has!" lol Excellent writing, somehow I was on Diana's side even though she was er, killing her husband! Great job!
Reviewer: Trial
AnonymousDate: 08/16/05 - 04:31PM
Title: Breaking Point
Amazing, I loved every single word in this story. I was really captured by the first sentence. Amazingly done.
Reviewer: fauxamiSignedDate: 07/09/05 - 12:19PM
Title: Breaking Point
That was really awesome, who could've thought that Justin could be a villain. This is a winner!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, sugar. It's hard making Justin a villian because he's so sweet, LMAO! Thanks for the review, sugar. I'm glad you liked it so much =D
Reviewer: Mariah111384
AnonymousDate: 06/12/05 - 01:42PM
Title: Breaking Point
Wow man. That was chilling. I don't get scared easily and that got me so freaked out. lol Its been a while since i read anything and you scared the bejesus outta mell gibson and me. WOW.
Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad it scared you, LOL! Scare the bejesus out of Mel Gibson, lol. Nice, lol. Thanks for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: VevaTSignedDate: 05/28/05 - 06:08PM
Title: Breaking Point
THAT WAS AMAZING TEE!!! I LOVED IT! OMG! I AM OVERWHELMED! Even though I love my baby and everything I loved your story. You captured me and made my heart stop. " I love you too. But I hate you the same." OMG! I can't say it enough. You must teach me your skills. OMG! " Di.....Help me."
" No."
Damn! That was cold blooded. I just started a story, I'm going to go write now. Great job. Damn that was good.
Author's Response: That's one of my favorite lines, LOL. Sugar, you are too kind! I'm so flattered by your review, hun. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story, sugar!
Reviewer: FelixSignedDate: 05/23/05 - 09:54AM
Title: Breaking Point
OH MY WORD! THAT IS MOST DEFINITELY THE MOST AMAZING STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!
You are a great writer, especially with first person. My current story is in first person, and I feel as though I've mutilated the point of view after reading this.
I felt every singe emotion she did, and I have never felt so moved and so caught up... Just... WOW WOW WOW!!!
Girl you are an AMAZING writer!
Author's Response: OMG, I'm going to cry, lol. You are too sweet, sugar. I'm not a good writer, lol. I'm amazed people even read my stuff, LOL. Thanks so much for the kind review. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: Helena
AnonymousDate: 05/16/05 - 07:06AM
Title: Breaking Point
WOAH! That packed quite a punch! Very very well written, and you really conveyed the way she thinks that maybe he'll change, I definately felt it. Fantastic work my dear!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks, sugar! I can always count on you for support ;) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: MadcrazychickSignedDate: 05/15/05 - 10:01PM
Title: Breaking Point
Man, I must love Mr. JT a little too much, cause even though he's supposed to be this manipulative, evil, abusive man when he was dying and I was slightly thinking, 'Noooo! ...do something! Save him! He can change!' lol But it was good, very good.
Author's Response: Girl, I feel you, but I had to kill him, LOL. It was for the challenge site, so what can I say? lol. I wanted to save him too, but we can't always get what we want, lol. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: god gave me style
AnonymousDate: 05/15/05 - 09:00PM
Title: Breaking Point
What is going on with Justin getting killed all of a sudden? Damn, that was good though. I just killed my husband, ugh, it sends chills up my spine.
Author's Response: LOL, I wrote it for the challenge site, LOL. I definitely didn't want to kill my boo, but it was a quick write, lol. That line is kinda creepy. I hope I never have to say that, lol. Thanks for the review.
