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Reviewer: IselaD
Anonymous
Date: 06/10/05 - 07:23AM
Title: A Whole Lot of Stuff
This is really poorly written, idea-wise and grammatically speaking. It doesn't make any sense! How could her friend Veva invite her to the party and then when she gets there they're meeting each other for the first time. Why would Justin act like he hadn't seen or thought of her since MMC and then immediate invite her out on tour. And what police officer would say "got drunk and fell out"?!?!?! Your facts are out of whack and your characterss' motivations are non-existant
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for the nice comment ISELAD. I'm glad you liked it. You don't have to worry about me anymore because I'm leaving, for good. Gigi, Marie, Timberlake..I'm sorry, I gotta go.
Reviewer: marie
Anonymous
Date: 06/09/05 - 06:31PM
Title: The ending
girl i loved it !!! cant till ur website comes up.... and thanx for the update......until next time.....laterz !!!
Author's Response: A'ight girl'in. I'm going to miss you so much. Bye sweetie.
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Anonymous
Date: 06/09/05 - 03:27PM
Title: The ending
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Author's Response: Excuse me. I'm not mad or anything, but what the hell does that mean? Your speechless or something.
Reviewer: marie
Anonymous
Date: 06/09/05 - 02:26PM
Title: Take me over
i love this story....glad u updated it.laterz
Author's Response: I'll tell you what. I'll make one last chapter for it before I leave, that sound good?
Reviewer: Agree With Marie
Anonymous
Date: 05/26/05 - 06:59AM
Title: Author's Note-Please read
This story rocks! V-doll write more.
Author's Response: I did.
Reviewer: marie
Anonymous
Date: 05/25/05 - 04:28PM
Title: Author's Note-Please read
great update !! ha i knew she was going to get pregnant....lol....About the story, i think you should finish it, cuz i absolutely love it, but u dont have to continue it if you dont want too, its really up to you. And your new story, cant wait till you post it so i can read that too. By the way your an awesome writer, keep of the fantastic job !!! Laterz
Author's Response: Aww that was so sweet. Thanks Marie. Since you're so nice I'm going to continue for you
Reviewer: marie
Anonymous
Date: 05/25/05 - 03:47PM
Title: A New Found Glory
awesome update!! i have a feeling she will get pregnant. anywayz cant wait till you update.....laterz
Author's Response: I did. I don't think I'll be wriing more unless you want me to, but I have a better story in the works!
Reviewer: marie
Anonymous
Date: 05/24/05 - 09:56PM
Title: You and Me
awesome story !! i cant wait till you update again, laterz chica!!!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I don't know if I can today, (25th) but I'll try. Thanks 4 reading.
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