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Reviewer: Shari
Anonymous
Date: 03/13/06 - 01:02PM
Title: Honey
Two-Thumbs Up!
Reviewer: JustJ
Anonymous
Date: 12/13/05 - 04:45PM
Title: Honey
Ok that was the hottest visual I read so far u did really good. Keep writing!
Reviewer: jo
Anonymous
Date: 08/17/05 - 02:27PM
Title: Honey
Holy shit. That was amazing. Damn it'a hot in here. That can not be your last visual. You have an amazing talent and writing visuals is just another form to practice your craft;D
Reviewer: chapstickonly
Anonymous
Date: 07/01/05 - 01:12PM
Title: Honey
i hate to sound like paris hilton but.. that's hot.
this maybe your first visual but hopefully its not your last, cause i'll keep reading em if you keep writing em
~c.s.
Author's Response: LMAO! I hate that girl, lol. But thank you nonetheless, lol. I wrote another visual, but that might be my last. . .LOL! Thanks for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: VevaT
Signed
Date: 06/10/05 - 06:40AM
Title: Honey
That was hot, I mean yeah they had sea, but it was a romantic sex that you have wehn you really love someone and care about them. And yes you did I fine job there, I fine job.
Author's Response: Exactly! I'm such a mush ball when it comes to sexual situations, so it wasn't as hot as other visuals, so. . .yeah, lol. Thanks for the review, sugar!
Reviewer: gitter15
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/05 - 01:56PM
Title: Honey
And it's just like honeeey when your love comes oveeerr meeee.... Awww, I liked it Timberlake. It was good. Hot. Sexy. You did a great job. ;) I enjoyed every moment, LOL. *Smooches*
Author's Response: ROFL! Thanks, Jess. Hot and sexy, huh? Well, thanks very much. I'm sure you did enjoy every moment, LOL! ;)
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/05 - 08:34AM
Title: Honey
i liked that because it emphasixed the intimacy and wasn't just about them having sex like a lot of other visuals....great job.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. That's what I was going for. Thank you for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/05 - 06:45AM
Title: Honey
That was very... enjoyable :D Great work, loved it!
Author's Response: LMAO! Enjoyable, eh? LOL! Thanks, sugar!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 06/03/05 - 11:44PM
Title: Honey
Not bad not bad at all. That was hot!
Author's Response: Pssh. . . yeah right, LMAO! Thank you, Gigi, I appreciate it :)
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