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Reviewer: B Twice
Signed
Date: 08/07/06 - 12:29PM
Title: Spectator
WOw haha
Author's Response: About sums it up!
Reviewer: glitter15
Signed
Date: 06/23/05 - 07:51AM
Title: Spectator
Wow, I was searching on your page for some shorties, cus I was too lazy to start a chapter one and found this. Absoulutely amazing girl. I'm def. gonna have to check out some of your other work after this. Very sexy and creepy at the same time. Gave me the chils, lmao....the thought of it, is just sooo....creepy. Anyways, really well done sweety, I loved it!
Author's Response: Heh heh, I usually read shorts when I can't be arsed with chapter stories too *lol* Thanks for the review hon!!!
Reviewer: Kathryn
Anonymous
Date: 06/07/05 - 10:13PM
Title: Spectator
Okay, apparently it DID work on your website. Stupid bitchy tag board kept telling me it wasn't working. Well, now you know how I feel about four times in a row. Awesome!
I feel weirdly embarrassed about this.
Author's Response: Have I mentioned lately that I love you? *lol*
Reviewer: Kathryn
Anonymous
Date: 06/07/05 - 06:39PM
Title: Spectator
I was going to leave feedback for this on your site yesterday, but apparently I'm "too wordy." Ha. Who knew? Anyway, yeah, I must say I was quite shocked to see you doing NC-17, but I think you did a really good job with it. It was really well written, not trashy, and, for lack of a better word, creepy. Much darker than I'm used to reading from you, so that's different and different is awesome. One question, though. These characters aren't supposed to be anyone we know from previous Hollie stories, right? Because for some reason my brain was convinced that it secretly was and you're just being sneaky. I'm very paranoid. At first I thought it was like a 'Letting Go' thing and the spectator was Carl and then I realized that Carl is, well, you know. *knowing look* And I realized that Hollie wasn't famous. And then I thought it was Piper, but then I didn't think she was from a small town. So I stopped trying to figure it out. Wow. I am wordy. Okay, done.
Author's Response: Sure Piper's from a small town... if you call New York small. *lol* No my dear, you weren't supposed to know this characters from any story... although now come to think of it it's kind of in line with that little hotel room incident in Sides of the Coin... but then Renee was from Pittsburgh so that don't work either. I need to write some small town characters *lol*
Reviewer: Kenz
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/05 - 05:36PM
Title: Spectator
I purposely skimped on the details of that too, but I see no harm in telling you I had it in my head as him hiding in the shower - you know those huge ass showers some houses have which are kind of sunk into the floor a little? I had him hiding behind the curtain in one of those to my mind (like he'd had to suddenly dive in there because he heard her coming) but I was kind of wanting everybody else to be unsure of where he was because I thought it'd be creepier that way, as with not knowing precisely who he was.
I love how you did that, I think it really added to the creepiness, a wonderful effect. I'm really impressed with this, this is better than some people's 100th visual. Really original, chilling and affecting. In short: go you!
Author's Response: You're just buttering me up because you want Piper newness *lol*
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 06/05/05 - 03:52PM
Title: Spectator
Aah....welcome to the dark side, Hollie. It's fun writing sexy stuff when Justin Timberlake is your subject, isn't it? Anyway, I loved the concept, even if the mysterious peeping tom sounded like a complete psycho...it just added to the mood! Great job, I encourage more (not that I'm a perv who likes reading about JT getting dirty or anything....)
Author's Response: Honestly? It was no fun at all because I was absolutely convinced my mother was going to walk in and ask what I was doing... *LMAO* Then again... Justin Timberlake dropping his clothing and getting in the bath is quite a nice mental image now I think of it ;o)
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
Anonymous
Date: 06/05/05 - 01:59PM
Title: Spectator
that was great for your first vizzy type story...hehehe... i liked it...it was also one of the creepiest stories i've ever read. but, yeah, it was good. :)
Author's Response: Sorry I creeped you out *lol* Thanks for the review hon :o)
Reviewer: Ciara
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/05 - 09:05PM
Title: Spectator
i liked it too. but i was confused on who that was
Author's Response: Some random nutjob, pretty much *lol* II purposely only gave Justin an identity, so don;t worry because you're meant to be confused
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 06/04/05 - 09:02PM
Title: Spectator
I liked it, but I wanna know who was that that was watching her? And where was he watching her from? A closet in the bathroom? At one point I was thinking he was just stalker, but then I remembered him saying something about sending her letters...not that a stalker couldn't write her letters. Yeah, he probably was a stalker. A crazy fan of hers. She was famous too right? I read it all out of order, don't ask me why...lol I'm weird. :) Anyways, since I read it that way at first I thought he was some "normal" guy, who liked her and was watching from a window in his house or something and then I realized he was there...with her. So close. Which made it creepy. Imagine some strange man hiding out in your closet getting off whilst he spies on you. *shudders* But I have heard of guys doing that in real life. Like Em said, 'It's a sick world we live in these days... ' Wonder how long he's been doing that.
Author's Response: As for where he was watching from... I purposely skimped on the details of that too, but I see no harm in telling you I had it in my head as him hiding in the shower - you know those huge ass showers some houses have which are kind of sunk into the floor a little? I had him hiding behind the curtain in one of those to my mind (like he'd had to suddenly dive in there because he heard her coming) but I was kind of wanting everybody else to be unsure of where he was because I thought it'd be creepier that way, as with not knowing precisely who he was. Anyway, thanks so much for the review hon, much appreciated :o)
Reviewer: dancewithurheart08
Anonymous
Date: 06/04/05 - 07:28PM
Title: Spectator
i really liked the story--i was confused on who was watching tho..if i missed it im sorry lol!
Author's Response: Nah, you didn't miss anything, I just didn't tell you who it was!
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