Reviewer: glitter15
Signed
Date: 04/11/06 - 10:11PM
Title: Session 8: Intangible
Awww. This story is so great. You are so deep, bitch. I love it. LMFAO. Ok, so I didn't say that quite as eloquently as your brilliant ass would have, but you know. I try. I love how Gem is mixed. Gotta represent for us mixed girls, you know what I'm saying? LOL. Gem and Justin are so damn cute. I love how they have so much peace with each other and can just sit around taking pics and talking over music. I need you to update again though, cus I just read the last three chapters and now I'm stuck with nothing more to go onto. Anyways, I hope HOPE you're still alive woman. You need to let me know, okay! LOL. I love this story. PLEAAAAAASE update. (Yeah yeah yeah...I'm a shitty updater myself, hahaha. Don't remind me. :D)
Reviewer: glitter15
Signed
Date: 04/11/06 - 09:59PM
Title: Session 7: Immortalizing the Agony
Omg, I'm with the rest of the girls. I thought it was Justin--and I was like that fucking bastard. And now she's spending time with him?!! But then I re-read it and I got it. *Phew* hahaha. Aww, her and JT are cute. Glad he could get her to smile. :P Whee, on to next chapter. (Oh no, I'm gonna need you to update soon darling.)
Reviewer: glitter15
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Date: 04/11/06 - 09:53PM
Title: Session 6: Heartbroken
Awww, GIRLY, hello there! I'm sooo sorry, but as you know, I'm not the most punctual bitch on the planet. ROFL. With that said, this chapter had a lot of great lines. hahaha. "So that's why you're fucking Tina?" Hahah. Justin is a man-whore, why should Gem feel she is anything different? Maybe later. Hmm. Lmao. Poor bitch is getting sprung. But hopefully Justin won't fuck her over, since he's got the whole brokenhearted thing going on. "It sucks. It's complete torture, it should be illegal. I wake up every morning at 6:00 so I can get a ride in a beat up Pinto. Lisette is like the only person I know who drives in this city. I walk down the halls of Amerson, sit in the back of every class and it just makes me want to shoot myself. And then I eat lunch in the indoor cafeteria with bulimic bimbos like Carli Hannigan. And if I'm really lucky I get to eat it with my asshole boyfriend who I hardly ever see anymore." LOL. Nice way to describe school. Isn't school just great? *gag* ;) lmfao. Ok, I'm going to the next chapter--because shit--my reviews suck madd ass. hahaa. I still love you though. :D
Reviewer: glitter15
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Date: 04/11/06 - 09:52PM
Title: Session 6: Heartbroken
Awww, GIRLY, hello there! I'm sooo sorry, but as you know, I'm not the most punctual bitch on the planet. ROFL. With that said, this chapter had a lot of great lines. hahaha. "So that's why you're fucking Tina?" Hahah. Justin is a man-whore, why should Gem feel she is anything different? Maybe later. Hmm. Lmao. Poor bitch is getting sprung. But hopefully Justin won't fuck her over, since he's got the whole brokenhearted thing going on. "It sucks. It's complete torture, it should be illegal. I wake up every morning at 6:00 so I can get a ride in a beat up Pinto. Lisette is like the only person I know who drives in this city. I walk down the halls of Amerson, sit in the back of every class and it just makes me want to shoot myself. And then I eat lunch in the indoor cafeteria with bulimic bimbos like Carli Hannigan. And if I'm really lucky I get to eat it with my asshole boyfriend who I hardly ever see anymore." LOL. Nice way to describe school. Isn't school just great? *gag* ;) lmfao. Ok, I'm going to the next chapter--because shit--my reviews suck madd ass. hahaa. I still love you though. :D
Reviewer: Timberlake
Signed
Date: 03/06/06 - 08:17PM
Title: Session 8: Intangible
see, I'm not a pushy person, nor am I violent, but if you don't update this got damn story, I'm gonna hunt you down and make you write! That is all. I kid, I kid. But PLEASE update. I'm begging you! Whimpering like a hungry puppy! LOL
Reviewer: Ani
Anonymous
Date: 12/03/05 - 12:49AM
Title: Session 8: Intangible
You are abso-freekin' deekin'-lutely AWESOME. I love this story so much. Please continue.
Author's Response: coolness! A NEW REVIEWER! i was beginning to think no one else other than my few faithful readers were reading this. thank you so much for the review. i'm really glad you like it :)
Reviewer: timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 11/24/05 - 11:07PM
Title: Session 8: Intangible
omg, you are a. . . i don't even know, but this story is amazing. the way you write is something else. it's so deep, ya know? the things they talk about and the words they say are just so. . . real. i love this story. update soon =]
Author's Response: aw, thank you! like, seriously when i sit down to right this i'm just pouring out all the things i'd probably say if i were gem and all the things i'd want to hear if jt was speaking to me. you've been a faithful reader and i'm really glad you love the story. pls continue to review
Reviewer: nikki g.
Anonymous
Date: 11/24/05 - 10:12PM
Title: Session 8: Intangible
Really unique story. i want more. I wanna figure this out. it's just....very creative. update soon and thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: lol, thanks... i think. creative is what i'm always striving for. i want to keep you guys guessing but is the story really such a mystery?
Reviewer: sweetcatastrophe
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Date: 11/24/05 - 07:30PM
Title: Session 8: Intangible
That's so sweet. I smiled at the end because it's just beautiful. You've got an updating bug or something. I need to get writing.
But anyway, this is great. I really liked it. The whole chapter was something I could see. I love this story and I'm glad you updated.
Happy Thanksgiving!
Author's Response: i'm never one to brag but i also really love the end of this chapter because it's really cute imagining some 16 year old girl kissing justin's hand because she can think of no other way to comfort him. i hate it when people are sad and i never know what to say to make them feel better, but i'm learning that it's not always what you say, but what you do. people don't always need words, ya know? lol. well yeah, thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sweetcatastrophe
Signed
Date: 11/08/05 - 10:09PM
Title: Session 7: Immortalizing the Agony
I thought Justin was cheating on her at first too and I was like what's going on?! This was GOOD, I'm so glad you finally updated! It was sad, I was almost crying right along with her.
Author's Response: haha. i'm so glad i was able to fool you. fortunately, it was just that jackass pierre, lol
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