Don't have much to say but I like it. As for the name I like Combustion.
Author's Response: well thank you. is the fact that you don't have much to say a good thing? i'm glad u like it, though. and that's 2 for "combustion", so far.
LOL, Timberlake you nerd! "Did they do the dirrty?" HAHAH....Naw, but did they? LMAO. I like the other name, "A true story...." You should listen to me, and not Timberlake, because YES. LOL, JK, jk. =) Timberlake is so gonna kick my ass now....
Hehe. Anyways. Nice addition. So, really why is she seeing a psychologists anyways? Did she do somethin' crazy that we don't know about yet? Hmm. And what about Justin? Is he in jail now? So many questions left unanswered. LoL! It's quite entertaining though...
And how the heck have you not seen the Notebook girl? That's like the my favorite sapppy cute aww movie ever!! (well since it's been in theatres, HA) And aww...you're so cute about being all flattered by my reviews. =) Update soon. *mwuah*
Author's Response: lol. "naw, but did they?" your curiosity is the fuel to my fire! so keep reading and you'll find out sooner or later. maybe sooner. maybe later. you're the first person to choose "based on a true story". may i ask why? lol. well yes, your questions will be answered in the upcoming chapter. and i know i'm a little slow but i still haven't seen "napoleon dynamite" either!! i'm trying to update, honestly, i am, but i'm stuck... can't find the right words or the right music to stimulate me. well, thank you very much for the review. and when r you going to update miss missy?
Wow. I'm truly amazed by this story. You're brilliant, sugar. You're welcome for the reviews. I'm not a good author, but I'm glad you adore me, LOL! So, thanks for that, hun, lol. Update soon. I like "Combustion" by the way. And, did they do the dirrty? LMAO.
Author's Response: well i'm trying to update but i'm kind of stuck. i'm still trying to figure out exactly where the story is going. i'm really not all that brilliant though, i'm trying to tell you that it's you. thank for another wonderful review. i think i'm liking 'combustion' too. as for the "dirrty"... you'll just have to keep reading to find out :)
Wow. This is so freakin' good! Why didn't I read this sooner? You're amazing! I love iT!!! I'm so excited! Update soon!
Author's Response: *scream* i'm really glad you like it! and i appreciate you reviewing. you're making me excited too! lol. don't worry either, i'm going to try to update soon.
::high squeaky voice:: Justin? Window? Coffee? ::faints:: haha. JK. But seriously that is one of the best parts of your story... having her see Justin naked like a blue-jay, just like the day he was born. Although, it wasn't as big -- okay, I'll stop. Review... this is a review... not a freaking book that you're trying to write.... okay. I might have missed something or I'm just stupid but what's with all the names at the beginning? I didn't quite get that, but I loved the opening paragraph! hehe. And I have one question; since she's seen Jay naked, is he going to demand that he see her naked, just to settle the score? hahahahah. okay.. that was stupid, I don't care, I got a laugh outta it.
Author's Response: lmao! i was trying not to faint as i was writing this, just imagining him standing there like that...! i really appreciate you reviewing. it's so awesome when the same readers keep coming back. as for the names: they're all justin's previous lovers. when i get to part 2, his account, you'll learn more about them. i'm glad you liked the opening paragraph too. and hmm, now that you've mentioned it maybe JT will demand to see gem! ;)
AHH another awesome chapter. Once again, I loved the first part. I don't know what to call it...the poem thingy. LMAO. Ok, why can't I see Justin naked in a freakin' window? My luck just aint that DAYUM good I guess. Lucky slut. LOL. Just kidding...but anyways. I liked his fowardness at the end..."let's go get coffee." Like its a demand, not even a question. Hmm....I'm really wondering what happens next...soo...are you better than me with the whole updating thing? *Lordy, let's hope so for my sake!* LMAO...
Author's Response: the part in the beginning... well, you'll discover what it is later on. lol. god, if only i could see JT naked too! i agree, gem is a lucky little booger! JT's forwardness is also going to play a big part in the story, so i'm glad you like it. the thing is... i think i'm like you when it comes to updating. if i'm feeling it i'll be on a roll, but as soon as i get stumped or busy the updates become scarce. summer vacation is right around the corner, though, so i think i'll be able update a lot. thanks again, for the review!
Hey hon...it's me! LOL. For once I get to be on the other side and review! Anyways...this was a really interresting and catchy introduction! I loved what Gem wrote at the begginning. (Omg, I can never spell that word right...forgive me.) Anyways....it was nice! you have a LOVELY way with words, I mean that! I'm such a nerd and I'm intrigued by that kinda stuff. Some writers can just flow and sound so ....great. You have that. I don't, so you suck. LMAO jk. But anyways....I'm off to read ch. 2, so you'll hear from me again soon. =)
Author's Response: OM-fucking-G! (sorry, i just had to spell that out. too. in. shock!) you're one of my favorite authors! and now you're reviewing me! i could seriously cry!! thank you so so much for the review! and it's YOU who has the lovely way with words! don't worry, either, i get stuck on writing beginning too!
I don't remember who it was but I remember reading the other day someone saying that you were one of their favorite authors and then today here one of your stories are at the top of the 'recently added' and I thought to myself...why not give it a shot?
So I aimed and fired and your story survived. lol
And it was definitely worth it. I love the beginning paragraph...it pulled me right into the story. But I'll admit the whole time I was reading that I was thinking 'this is so good...must be a song or something she's using.' lol But apparently it's not, and it's all you instead. Very, very good. I like the perspective you used having it like we are the psychologist....cause in a way that's what we are every time we read a story. We listen to the person's story as they tell it and then usually wanna give them some kind of advice and since we can't talk directly to the character that usually comes out in reviews or just plain ol' grumblingi/yelling at the book and/or story while you're reading. lol Anyways back to your brillance...lol I'm loving what I read so far and I'm definitely looking forward to reading so more of your stuff. It's writers like you that make writers like me jealous...in a good way. lol =) Update soon!
Author's Response: lol, thank you so much for giving me a chance! i'm very flattered that you thought the part in the beginning was a song or something. actually, when i started this it was just my thoughts all jumbled in my head and i needed to get them out. which led to the transformation of gem! i agree that second person POV is like one of the best viewpoints to use because it sucks you in and makes you a character. i'm really glad you like it too. and don't worry, i'm working on trying to update soon.
