Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 07/05/05 - 07:16PM
Title: Chapter 4: Too Bad, Move On
I dare Justin to get mad and try to cop an attitude for her being on a date!
Author's Response: LOL! YEAH THAT'S THE SPIRIT! Hah! Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: MickeyMouseEars
Signed
Date: 07/05/05 - 05:49PM
Title: Chapter 4: Too Bad, Move On
LOL! A detector.... that's hilarious. Well.... jeesh girlie, you need to add more description in there!!! Lol. But the story is good. Just more description. Describing words are good! :D
Author's Response: Ehh..well what can I say? LOL! Yeah I need more description..its a pain in the neck but I was kinda rushing through that chapter...well that's not different. LOL Thanks!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 07/05/05 - 04:08PM
Title: Chapter 4: Too Bad, Move On
GAH! That sucks! Akthough I wonder how Justin is gonna react when he finds she's on a date... hmm... Good chapter!
Author's Response: LOL shanks!:)
Reviewer: MickeyMouseEars
Signed
Date: 06/29/05 - 11:08PM
Title: Chapter 3: Secrets Unfolded
BSB! Yayuhh! That's great! Lmao. Sorry that I was bumped off the review wagon a lil bit. I've been busy these last couple of days... whoo. Senior year to plan for is noooot fun. Lol. But the update is good. and I hope to see a new one soon :)
Author's Response: LOL yeah i bet planning is ohh so much fun! ;) Shanks for your review!
Reviewer: whtny
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/05 - 06:26PM
Title: Chapter 3: Secrets Unfolded
well well well, what a twist. a GOOD twist though i must say. >drop cameron
Author's Response: hah! that's the spirit (drop cameron)! lol! thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Morgan
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/05 - 05:39PM
Title: Chapter 3: Secrets Unfolded
dude totally loved it. I was reading it and I was like, "I know that song... I know that song... Where do I know that song from?!" the BSB's! nice that was a great update I mean yeah it was quick but it was great. 2 big thumbs up. WOO! = )
Author's Response: haha! i go into that mode too..especially when people dont tell me who sings it or what the title is then i go mad lol! thanks for ur review--im slowing things down for the process in the story..its summer time as you can tell. lol!
Reviewer: Andrea
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/05 - 04:28PM
Title: Chapter 3: Secrets Unfolded
wow, that fast? the story moves so quickly now. maybe a suggestion to hold the the secrets back and give more detail.
Author's Response: yeah i wanna take things more slowly..im slipping into that summer mode..lol! thanks for ur suggestion!
Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/05 - 11:09AM
Title: Chapter 3: Secrets Unfolded
That was a good chapter. I hope they can work things out. Update soon
Author's Response: shanks!:)
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/05 - 10:53AM
Title: Chapter 3: Secrets Unfolded
A Backstreet boys song? Eww, traitor lol. He still loves her? Well thats a conundrum and a half. Good update
Author's Response: Haha! nice comment about the conundrum part:P and yeah its a bsb song..but i still like NSYNC better! if only they would get together again..-scratches chin- lol! thanks for ur review!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/05 - 04:33AM
Title: Chapter 2: Gotta Get Over You
Justin has an obsession, ha ha ha! Great update!
Author's Response: Justin can be obsessed with me anyday. -daydreams- LOL! if only. Thanks for the review!
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