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Reviewer: autumn_romance
Signed
Date: 09/09/05 - 09:14PM
Title: You Don't See Me
Wow, that was really good. I liked the way you potrayed your characters and how you describe their emotions. Well written, & good concept. You had me crying there! Haha (:
Reviewer: Sondra
Anonymous
Date: 09/06/05 - 08:14PM
Title: You Don't Know Me
*sigh* Marianne! How could you do this! Wow, that was really good but oh, so sad. How could she not tell him! How could she marry someone she doesn't love. Why didn't he stop her or she stop him! oh goodness, i'm getting frustrated. Seriously dude, you should consider sequalizing this cause that was just too good of something that's only two chapters! Pleaseee consider it! I'm such a huge fan of your writing and creativity and that was awesome. Keep it up!
Reviewer: Sondra
Anonymous
Date: 09/06/05 - 08:11PM
Title: You Don't See Me
oh my Goodness, that was SO sad! He had to let the woman he loved go! I was just chanting while reading "please tell her, please tell her man!" Sigh, that was so sad. I'm moving on to the next installment!
Reviewer: josie
Anonymous
Date: 08/18/05 - 08:50PM
Title: You Don't Know Me
OK enough tears. WHERE IS THE SEQUEL to this STORY. I hate sad endings. I get those enough in real life. I beg you to write a story on how they realize they really love eachother and go through ups and downs and she realizes that it hurts too much to settle for Ryan and she needs Justin and FATE steps in and Ryan turns out to be an asshole and Justin saves the day and declares his love but they are afraid because of what everyone will say because Ryan is Clive Davis' son and the entire planet was happy when he got married and everyone will think Justin is a home recker. WOOOHH too much mountain dew;D
Reviewer: josie
Anonymous
Date: 08/18/05 - 08:44PM
Title: You Don't Know Me
FRUSTRATINGLY BEAUTIFUL. This is what happens when people don't take THE RISK. You are an amazing writer. I know I keep saying that but the truth must be told.
Reviewer: Ani
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/05 - 01:25PM
Title: You Don't Know Me
Extremely, extremely sad. :[
Reviewer: Michelle
Signed
Date: 06/17/05 - 08:47PM
Title: You Don't Know Me
That's really sad! I think this story is actually something that happens quite often. You loving someone yet you don't have the guts to tell them, until it's too late. I hope things work out for them, but who knows? I mean she is married now. Unless she cheats on him...anyway, bring on the drama!
Reviewer: sarahj
Anonymous
Date: 06/15/05 - 09:44AM
Title: You Don't Know Me
Wow, that was really quite sad...why can't one of them just tell the other! I enjoyed it though, through the sadness ;)
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 06/15/05 - 09:43AM
Title: You Don't See Me
Nope, that's not the ending, nope. I refuse to accept it. Gabby wants Justin, Justin wants Gabby...for goodness sake woman let true love prevail, please!! lol Dammit, they would've been so cute together...what is with you and unhappy stories? Honestly....LOL I'm just kidding, that was great =)
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 06/15/05 - 06:47AM
Title: You Don't Know Me
:( That was so sad :( Why couldn't they be together? :( They should have just been honest with their feelings and they'd be living happily ever after :( That was fantastic, despite the numerous sad faces :( :) lol
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