Reviews For Moving On
Reviewer: glitter15 Anonymous Date: 11/07/05 - 06:15PM Title: The Confusion

Omg--you stupid little bitch! LOL. I don't appreciate this shit one bit, Mary J. Not one bit. Josie is being a spoiled little slut--LMAO. She needs to get over it. At least Justin wasn't letting the little hoe run his life--Mel on the other hand--what a fuckin' cow! Argh. I'm mad. You better update again, and soon. I'm mad at you in general, but now I'm even more mad. GRRRRRR. You backstabber, Mary J! Lmfao. Don't think I've forgotton our conversations lately.


Reviewer: laura!/butterbaby Anonymous Date: 11/01/05 - 09:33AM Title: The Reasons Why

hey there! am loving this sooo much, having a hard time with "older idea" of my baby, buuut this is too awesome to pass up! update soon, im hooked!!


Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Date: 08/31/05 - 11:17PM Title: The Reasons Why

Finally, it looks like Mel and Justin's relationship may be able to go somewhere. Hopefully, Josie won't take the news so bad. Great job again!


Reviewer: Amber - Jrtluva05 Anonymous Date: 08/22/05 - 04:21PM Title: The Changes In Time

That was really cute... i hope justin an mel hook up!! Josie will get use to it in time :P


Reviewer: Amber - Jrtluva05 Anonymous Date: 08/22/05 - 04:21PM Title: The Changes In Time

That was really cute... i hope justin an mel hook up!! Josie will get use to it in time :P


Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 08/22/05 - 08:56AM Title: The Reasons Why

I agree with what they said. Most stepmoms I know are really awesome and not at all the witch bitch in fairytales...not that I'm jumping ahead by assuming Justin and hot momma Melanie are gonna get hitches of course...LMAO Luuurve this story almost as much as I love Justin's abs...;)


Reviewer: Helena Anonymous Date: 08/22/05 - 06:08AM Title: The Reasons Why

I really hope Josie tries to be open minded about this, she could get a lot out of the relationship. Great idea Lynn lol, they needed to talk. Good update!


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 08/21/05 - 07:21PM Title: The Reasons Why

I think that Lynn should try and set Jose straight about thing with Melanie and Justin. And it's time for Justin to let go and move on.


Reviewer: Sondra Anonymous Date: 08/20/05 - 05:48PM Title: The Betrayal That Follows

Aww I just don't know what to say! And yay! they kissed! And booo, they stopped! lol. I feel so bad for Justin because he feels that he's betraying his deceased wife and his daughter. He's trying to hard not to have feelings and emotions and...lust lol. I wish there could be a sign where Kia could give him her blessing. And children...they're a little different lol. I hope Josie can come around and see that her daddy needs happiness and that Mel can give it to him. Hurry and update! I want more, I'm hooked!


Reviewer: Sondra Anonymous Date: 08/20/05 - 05:44PM Title: The Promise That's Made

Aww I kinda feel bad that he promised Josie that he wouldn't like Melanie. It was really sweet that he promised her and he wants to be so true to his little girl, but he and Mel are just sooo cute! And she could be an awesome mother to her and I think she'd be good for Justin. Maybe he should have another talk with Josie. I dunno what's right anymore! lol. I'm hooked man! Awesome chapter girl





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