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Reviewer: Sondra
Anonymous
Date: 08/20/05 - 05:42PM
Title: The Sleepover and Supervisors
Awwww that was so cute! Justin at the sleepover. And lmao @ him looking at Mel's breasts. Oh good Lord, and he hasn't had sex in 4 yrs? Sweet Jesus Mother of God *thuds* That's unbelievable. Melanie, please help the brotha out. Omg, when he gets the opportunity to have sex, he's gonna knock the shit out of her ass. Man, I'm such a freak lol. Pretend I didn't say that lol. I loved the chapter and I'm loving this story!
Reviewer: Sondra
Anonymous
Date: 08/20/05 - 05:39PM
Title: The Trip To Sears
He certainly has a mature daughter on his hands. She chooses to go to Sears instead of Gucci? lmao. She certainly is alot like her mother. And this sleepover sounds like fun. And this Melanie sounds like she can be his new love *crosses fingers*
Reviewer: Sondra
Anonymous
Date: 08/20/05 - 05:37PM
Title: The Changes In Time
i'm loving this story girl! keep up the good work! Josie and Justin *smiles*
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 08/08/05 - 12:33PM
Title: The Betrayal That Follows
Oh, poor Justin! But, he has to remember that Nakia wants him to move on. It'll be hard at first, but he has to. As for Josie, well, Justin said it best: Being a great daddy sucks major ass. . .
Reviewer: Kelly
Anonymous
Date: 08/07/05 - 07:28PM
Title: The Betrayal That Follows
Good Job! Uh...I feel bad for every character in this story. Josie because of her not being able to be close to people and that she doesn't understand the feelings between her father and Mel. I feel bad for Mel because she really likes Justin and she can't be with him. And Justin b/c of his feelings of guilt for both Kia and Josie. He needs to know that Kia wanted him to find someone else that is going to love him and Josie, and that she wouldn't want him to be alone for the rest of his life. I just want Justin and Mel to work things out between the two of them, and Josie to be happy for her father. And then, they live happily ever after. lol Update soon!
Reviewer: glitter15
Anonymous
Date: 08/07/05 - 04:20PM
Title: The Betrayal That Follows
Gah. Justin needs to stop trippin'. He needs to just sit down and have a talk with his daughter, simply explaining that he really likes Mel, etc. etc. I'm sure the bitch will get over it. rofl. =) I can just tell you're gonna make this all too dificult, aren't you Mary J? Of course you won't just let something RATIONAL like that happen. Oh no, OF course NOT. LoL. Update soon, bitch, 'cause I'm not patient. Thanks.
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 08/07/05 - 05:06AM
Title: The Betrayal That Follows
Guh, poor Justin, he's really torn isn't he? I can understand how he feels, but like everyone else said, he needs to move on... to Melanie. He also needs to have a sit down with Josie and explain to her that even if him and Melanie broke up, it doesn't mean the end of their friendship. Great update!
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 08/07/05 - 04:23AM
Title: The Betrayal That Follows
I agree with basically everything that Hollie said. There's no doubt Justin loved Nakia, but I'm sure she would want him to move on. As for Josie...I know it's hard for her, but if I'm sure if Justin just explained she could have Ashley as a step sister, Josie might warm up to the idea! lol Fabulous, daaarling!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 08/06/05 - 05:13PM
Title: The Betrayal That Follows
Justin - til death do you part. You kept your word, your vows are fulfilled, and you'll nevers top loving Kia so that promise will never get broken either. As for Josie... I know she's young, but I really do think it was unfair of her to ask that of her father. He has to move on with his life. Of course, Justin's the dumb one for making a stupid promise like that - we always fall for the ones we're not supposed to, after al.. *sigh* Great work as usual my lovely!!!
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 08/06/05 - 05:12PM
Title: The Betrayal That Follows
Uh oh, Josie is NOT going to be happy about this... wait, she's already not happy about it. Uh, such drama...
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