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Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 08/06/05 - 05:02PM
Title: The Betrayal That Follows
I think him and Josie need to seriously sit down and talk.
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
Anonymous
Date: 08/06/05 - 04:41PM
Title: The Betrayal That Follows
sigh....so cute...but i can see how he's torn between his loyalty to josie and his want to move on...
i hope it all works out...;) this is great.
Reviewer: Kelly
Anonymous
Date: 07/18/05 - 01:24PM
Title: The Promise That's Made
I'm loving this story so far. It's so cute how Mel placed the money back in his pocket. More soon!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 07/18/05 - 12:17PM
Title: The Promise That's Made
I hope the fingers on his other hand were crossed when he promised Josie.
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 07/16/05 - 05:18PM
Title: The Promise That's Made
No no no, promises that you can't keep are bad! Bad Justin! Because he can't keep this one, can he? I mean I can fully appreciate Josie's hesitance, but there's far too much sparkly chemistry for Melanie and Justin! I mean, Ashley could be Josie's stepsister, and that's great, right? Oh wait, I'm a little ahead of myself LOL
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/05 - 06:05AM
Title: The Promise That's Made
Oh don't promise Josie, that SUCKS! They really seem to enjoy each other's company, and the thing about the not having dads and not getting too close is really heartbreaking. Great work!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/05 - 12:52AM
Title: The Promise That's Made
Aww how cute!
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
Anonymous
Date: 07/15/05 - 08:58PM
Title: The Promise That's Made
gosh i love this story..it's such a sweet daddy story..ha..more soon!
Reviewer: Drae
Anonymous
Date: 07/11/05 - 08:38PM
Title: The Sleepover and Supervisors
I need more updates of this :)
Reviewer: god gave me style
Anonymous
Date: 07/01/05 - 02:36PM
Title: The Sleepover and Supervisors
I'm cute and funny.
That is so cute!! This chapter was adorable and I love how Justin was totally busted while checking out my Melanie. This story is going to be so good, I can tell already. Great job chica and keep up the good work! :)
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