Reviews For Moving On
Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 07/01/05 - 10:31AM Title: The Sleepover and Supervisors

You have totally made it up to me, for making me cry (while reading almost every chapter) in "Get Lifted". This chapter was so cute and funny...just like Melanie's crush.


Reviewer: Helena Anonymous Date: 07/01/05 - 04:56AM Title: The Sleepover and Supervisors

"As far as I'm concerned, she'll have no physical contact with a male until she's thirty. . ." LOL! Bless him and his overprotective ways, he's such a darn cute father. You know, he can father my children if he really wants... Great chapter, very cute!


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 07/01/05 - 03:31AM Title: The Sleepover and Supervisors

That's very presumptuous Mr Timberlake...


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 11:58PM Title: The Sleepover and Supervisors

AWWW! That's all I got everything's been said already.


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 06/30/05 - 10:45PM Title: The Sleepover and Supervisors

AWW rofl. Justin is such a motherfucker.....lmfao. Just kidding, he's cute. :P How does he know it's him. Of couse he assumes, cocky bastard. Right...he's still cute though. LMAO. ANyways, can Mel and Justin just fuck already. Hahaha...at him staring at her breasts. Typical fucking male. LOL. Even I have no boobs, & guys still stare. now you know that's sad mary J. *rolls* ANYWAYS...get your fucking mother ass on line and talk to me or else be sorry. Good. Glad we got that underway. I love this story...it's so cute. Tee hehehehe...I love myself. Bye.


Reviewer: Ani Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 08:29PM Title: The Sleepover and Supervisors

Aw this chapter was so cute! It'd suck so bad if Justin wasn't the dude Melanie liked. LOL . Awesomeness.


Reviewer: Ani Anonymous Date: 06/23/05 - 12:43PM Title: The Trip To Sears

I'm hooked! It's good to see them doing good after Nakia pasted away. Dude, I woulda killed to be able to shop at Gucci when I was 9. Crazy girl. LOL. No, it's good she ain't materialistic. Anyways, can't wait to see what happens with Melanie and Justin. ;]] Awesome update.


Reviewer: nini22 Anonymous Date: 06/23/05 - 11:56AM Title: The Trip To Sears

2 chapters into the story and i'm so in love with josie she's so cute and so not spoiled, But homegirl better know whats good for her and shop at the G lol


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 06/23/05 - 11:20AM Title: The Trip To Sears

Okay, when I was nine I would have LOVED to shop at Gucci. What is wrong with that child? But I do agree with her on the ice cream thing...only because I didn't like most of my classmates when I was nine. Ooh, could this be a new l-o-v-e for Justin?


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 06/23/05 - 06:31AM Title: The Changes In Time

OMG . IM THE BIGGER SLUT? Loook at that right there!! Hopefully j finds love in ahsley. OH SO NOW you're into Justin and youngins, Chris? ROFL. And what the heck, am I the only one who missed the part about a swoof blah blah,w hich I don't know what is anyways, so who cares....rofl





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