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Reviewer: vessy
Signed
Date: 03/23/07 - 01:03PM
Title: Chapter Two: The First Date
cool story, update soon!
Reviewer: lroberts
Anonymous
Date: 08/15/05 - 03:45PM
Title: Prologue
WHY did I not know this existed? Hmm? Why? Because I love it. It's hard to catch a readers attention without introducing characters in the first chapter...prologue...whatever. Language was beautiful, and sophistically simple. Love it.
Reviewer: Anna
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 07:50AM
Title: Chapter Two: The First Date
Hey C....
Dude... I have one thing to say I bet you know already but here it is.... WHERE THE FUCK IS TRACE
I like the fact you took a stab at him.. ha the janet jackson shoe comment, keep the sarcasm rolling sister! If you need any help Im happy to shoot the breeze for you my hate for JT has increased 10 fold today.. and I mean 10 fold!!!
OK so you know how I got the new job? My new music channel is like 60;s 70's 80's and 90'ds well for some reason the tall jack arse is on every 7 minutes for the one campaign??!?! I mean I love that, I gave them money but maybe they should cut him out... self centered arsehole
sorry for ranting in my review
Reviewer: Ashlie
Anonymous
Date: 07/07/05 - 09:07PM
Title: Chapter Two: The First Date
I loooove it! Why do they have to live in two different countries?! They'll find a way.. atleat I hope they will. Please update soon. I like this story a lot.
Reviewer: dancewithurheart08
Signed
Date: 07/05/05 - 08:36AM
Title: Chapter Two: The First Date
another awesome story--i dunno how you keep up with all them! im having a hell of a time trying to come up with ideas for mine plus finding the time! hmm..maybe i should that now..-wonders- neways update soon!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 07/04/05 - 08:29PM
Title: Chapter Two: The First Date
No nudity? That sucks ass! LMFAO! Just kidding. That was adorable. They are so cute and I really love this story Teeny. Once again, you've got me hooked. Loves it. Update soon.
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 07/04/05 - 07:41PM
Title: Chapter One: The First Meeting
Aw, LMAO! Eve is so clumsy, but Justin was so sweet to stick up for her. I could just imagine his fine ass with that Pony hat on, DaMN! LOL! And Eve is too slow. I would've helped him with the stain, LMAO! Yeah, I'm dirrty, ROFL. Just kidding. Loved it! LOL!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 07/03/05 - 10:20PM
Title: Chapter Two: The First Date
Great job once again. I'm becoming very intrigued and really wanna see how they are gonna work whatever it is out. NIce match. Oh yeah, spoiled kids...ughhh. What can you say? I don't have that much patience and prob would have gotten fired. LOL. Please update soon and thanks. J&B!
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 07/03/05 - 06:53PM
Title: Chapter Two: The First Date
Despite that spoiled brat..french fries are really good. LOL random, I know. And that "catch a coffee" thing was adorable. Update soon. =)
Reviewer: glitter15
Signed
Date: 07/03/05 - 04:37PM
Title: Chapter Two: The First Date
Oh my goodness, TWO updates for TEENY in one day. HOLY SHIT...what the hell is going on woman? ROFL. *Loves IT!!!* Anyways...just friend. PSHHHHHHAW. Whateva, we all know Justin will see her naked eventually--or else you and I will be havin' some problems, missy. You know my perverted ass expects some "bang bang" here along the way. ROFL. Cute chapter, darling. I like....I like it...I really really like it....Okay, I can't member what song that is, but it's a song. Update soon!
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