Don't look no further. Baby, I'm back, yeah. I'm here to cater to youuuu. Yeah, cow, I told you I was coming to review it! And okay, so it's not 5:00AM, but it's close e-damn-nough. I'll save that kind of insanity for you! LOL. I'm so excited -- this is my first review for you EVER! Give me a round of applause. Now anyway, I already told you I liked the beginning and that didn't change, ho. You don't need coaching at the mushy shit cuz that was perfect -- unless of course somebody coached you on this one, too ROFL. But for you to have knocked it out in just a couple of hours, it was pretty damn awesome, you little slut. I'm jealous now. And I've decided that Joke's On You is on my To Do list for THIS weekend. Yes, you VIP bitch. LOL. Seriously though, this was definitely a fun one. (Could've been LONGER.) But yes, the friendly/fun/I-Love-You-But-I'm-Not-Supposed-To-Say-It/confusing/back-and-forth relationship that everyone tries to avoid but inevitably ends up there. It's the stuff that awesome stories are made of. This so could be a long story -- there's your idea for the next one, Jess! Duh. So yeah, I'll be looking for the expansion on this. After you dedicate one of these babies to me, thank-you-very-much. Awesome job, cow. =D Do you like the way I rock it? Boy, I think it's so chaotic!
This story was just unbelievably hot. Makes me miss having man.
Author's Response: Awww, LOL. Thanks hon. I'm glad you liked it. And I know what you mean, I miss my man too...ROFL. =)
Reviewer: Someone is thinking about sex... OK, its you.
AnonymousDate: 07/05/05 - 12:05AM
Title: {CHAOTIC}
lol. its too bad i am not married yet... sigh. well, until then... you keep writing and corrupting my innocent mind... and i will keep reading... :)
Author's Response: lmao, you're such a dork girl. =) i'm not corrupting you...i've been doing that since the 9th grade, i'm sure i've succeeded in my job by now, don't ya think? lmao....love ya.......
Ewww, Jess, you nasty! What did I tell you about spying on me and Justin and writing stories about it? lol But despite that you did achieve your goal of it being 'dead sexy.' lol 'Dead sexy' sounds like something Austin Powers would say. So did I like it? Yeah, baby, yeah. haha But seriously stop spying on Mr. Timberlake and me. It's weird. :)
Author's Response: ROFL. Pshawwww Angie, don't EVEN front!!! You know good & well that I write these stories off personal experience basis, not by spying. ;) ;) LMFAO, Did I make you horny, baby? ROFL, ok I won't ever say that again, but at least I only did it in writing. I'm glad you liked the story though, even if you are hallucinating and wishing it was about something you and Justin actually experienced. ROFL. ;) *smooches*
that was a perfect mixture of cute, sexy, and just hot...
just woo ::fans self:: intense. :P
MWAHS.
Author's Response: LOL, aww that's kal!! I wuuuuuv you....and thanks for that hot piece of fiction you wrote me. I'm still mad that you're making me write you a story though....biotch. rofl.
Damn bitch, that was HOT! LMAO! Thanks for the dedication. I loved it. It was sexy. It was slutty. It was lovey-dovey. Fantastic combo. And you said you were a bad writer. I should kick your ass, LMAO ;)
Author's Response: LOL, aww I'm glad you liked it, considering it was for your ass and all. ROFL. Never again, and look you even started a nasty trend, b/c Kaleena found out I wrote you a story, & then her ass went and copied your dumb ass, and forced MY ass to write one for her. At least this time I was smart & made her do something in return...but still. Ahh, how many times did I just say 'ass?' Rofl. =)
WHOA! As far as i'm concerned this story puts you in the #1 ho status lol. But for real this is the first time in awhile i'm intriuged to say make this a full story, I want more.
Author's Response: ROFL. No no no!! You've got it all wrong darling, I SWEAR, I'm not the #1 hoe! ROFL. There are other authors that hold that position....*Cough teeny cough* LOL. I'm glad you liked the story enough to want it to be long, but honestly, I don't even know how I'd turn it into something long. Don't worry though, I'm working on another short, so hopefully you'll like that one just as much. :P