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Reviewer: Hobs
Signed
Date: 12/17/06 - 06:45AM
Title: What's Real?
OOhh, smoochies... why do people always stop just when it's getting to the good part? tease *lol*
Reviewer: Hobs
Signed
Date: 12/15/06 - 11:20AM
Title: Cheating Fate
I need more. Like, now. *afterthought* Please :o) Author's Response: I'm really gonna try to update more. It seems if I post shorter chapters I'll post more often then if I try to expand to long chapters. I feel more sense of accomplishment if I can post more often and will hopefully end up writing more in the long run. We'll see. Thanks for the enthusiasm.
Reviewer: E
Anonymous
Date: 09/17/06 - 05:48PM
Title: Pregnant Pause
I just found both of your stories today and I just finished what you have so far. I really hope you update. I want to know what happens with Justin and Sam. Both of the stories are great!!
Reviewer: Amy A
Anonymous
Date: 06/05/06 - 12:40PM
Title: Pregnant Pause
I like the extra dialogue, it sort of gives Sam more dimension/depth, i hope you understand what i mean xxx.
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 06/02/06 - 06:30PM
Title: Pregnant Pause
awww, i've had the conversation with an ex!! they really need to get back together!!
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 06/02/06 - 07:51AM
Title: Pregnant Pause
Justin's back! :D Glad to see that, I was hoping for him to come back while I was reading the last chapter. So then if Ryan comes to pick up Jack, Justin might be over and even if it was under friendly pretenses, the green-eyed monster still might make an appearance. haha, oh, the possible drama. lol Or the chance for a second chance, which is good too.
But before I jump too far ahead into things that might never happen, I just wanted to say that I think you're doing a good job with the dialogue and I'm like that the chapters are getting longer too. Sam's awkward thoughts during the silences were kinda funny. Nice update. Update soon!
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 05/31/06 - 08:24AM
Title: Expressive Mind
Ah, so that's how he meets Miss Caroline. But where did she come from? Why was she in his brother's house? It seemed like she appeared out of nowhere, but Ryan wasn't surprised. Anyways, it's nice to see you going into more dialogue, it really brought out Ryan's brother's character.
Author's Response: oops, they actually meet during a family involved event at his nephews kindergarten class, i meant to imply this, but i guess i dropped the ball. see this is why i don\'t do dialogue, cause i suck at it, and it draws my energy away from the first person writing that i enjoy and feel i excel at. yeah, so i\'m gonna try to clear that up. the lack of sense involved with the chapter could also have to do with the fact that i wrote it real real late at night. i should wait to post until daylight in the future.
Reviewer: Amy
Anonymous
Date: 05/30/06 - 05:09PM
Title: What You Need
I just read this from the start. It's very interesting. I can't wait for the update.
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 05/29/06 - 01:13PM
Title: What You Need
yea!! cant wait for more
Reviewer: vessy
Anonymous
Date: 05/27/06 - 05:46AM
Title: the 'ex' in experience
i like the stroy, but i wat longer chapters pleaseee. and more dialogues :)
Author's Response: i swear i\'m trying to make the chapters longer. slowly but surely.
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