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Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Anonymous
Date: 11/27/05 - 12:59PM
Title: Six Months to Life.
So Ryan did get into a fight. Hmmm, wonder if it was with Justin though. And after he came back after leaving for those 45 minutes...did they talk at all? Did she try to make it work? Did he want to make it work? I dunno why, but I'm really liking Ryan for some reason and I don't want him to wind up all alone...and I definitely don't think he should walk out on his child just because he can't get along with the mother. I mean, look at Em and Kim... I think it would be nice in the next chapter to hear about all this from Justin and Ryan's perspective. Nice update though, hopefully you'll update again real soon. :D
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 11/26/05 - 07:13PM
Title: **authors note**
Well that's good that you're going to continue with this cause I really like this story. Ryan seems like a really good guy, it just sucks that that's not good enough for her and that it took getting with him, marrying him and being pregnant with his child for her to realize that Justin's the one she really wants. Justin should move on to, or at least be trying to, and have her find out and become jealous. Has Ryan ever meet Justin? Did he come back after he left at the end of the "Because I Love You" chapter? Maybe he went for a drive to clear his mind and wound up running into Justin...maybe he's gone for so long that it really worries her and for whatever reason (maybe she doesn't have another car, or doesn't know who else to call) she calls Justin to get him to drive around with her looking for him. Enough with my maybes... Update soon, I wanna see what happens! :D
Author's Response: thanks so much for the 'review' it actually kind of inspired the new chapter. you basically helped to kick my ass over the writer's block. :)
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 11/26/05 - 05:40AM
Title: **authors note**
Good, 'cause I was getting impatient!!! *lol* I'm just kidding, I know how it is when life gets in the way!!!
Reviewer: Vanessa
Anonymous
Date: 11/26/05 - 04:38AM
Title: **authors note**
Thank you! good luck writing! i cant wait!
Reviewer: kelly
Anonymous
Date: 11/26/05 - 02:52AM
Title: **authors note**
just read the first 6 chapters and i really like the story so far..update soon
Reviewer: stacey
Anonymous
Date: 10/24/05 - 08:08PM
Title: What's Missing
lol i love samantha. she's so indecisive and crazy and passionate... granted, it would've been better had she not noticed all of her indecisiveness before getting pregnant but she's a wonderful character.
Reviewer: Ashlie
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/05 - 09:33AM
Title: What's Missing
I really love this story! Hopefully, the writer's block will pass soon. The story is still amazing! Update soon!!!
Reviewer: Coffee
Signed
Date: 07/22/05 - 07:07PM
Title: What's Missing
'm really enjoying this story so far. I like being able to see the different thoughts and P.O.V.'s of the different characters. I know how bad writers block can be... I get it from time to time --scratch that-- all the time. Good luck, hope you can update soon. :)
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/05 - 06:21PM
Title: What's Missing
Hey I totally understand about not being able to get your thoughts together. But good chapter none the less.
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/05 - 12:08PM
Title: What's Missing
Good job. Update soon and thanks. J&B!
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