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Reviewer: pcjc24
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 08:56PM
Title: Chapter Twelve
Overall, I really like this. A teenager dealing with relatively normal problems and conflictions. It seems that the family is slowly falling apart, but there is some glimmer of hope in there. Keep writing because this is a relaly good story!! I can't wait to see how she deals with this.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 02:28PM
Title: Chapter Twelve
Why is Brianna such a bad ass? It makes me wonder if the other guys had kids especially teenagers what would that be like.
Reviewer: Louise
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/05 - 12:29PM
Title: Chapter Twelve
Oh man, she is going to get into so much trouble, parents always find out. LOL She should listen to her instincts telling her it's not right and run. Another great update.
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