Reviews For Best Of Me
Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 11/20/06 - 05:30AM Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)

Oooh....I loved it. I feel all gushy inside.

although, that feeling could be because it's 530 in the morning...but it was still great :)



Author's Response: haha 5:30 is pretty early (or late if you've just been awake the whole time). Thanks for reading/reviewing!


Reviewer: Gigi Signed Date: 11/20/06 - 03:06AM Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)

What can I really say that chapter was sweet, adorable, cute, and crazy! I'm gonna miss them!



Author's Response: Not that long after I posted this if I had of replied like a good lil' author haha, I would've said, I'm gonna miss them too. But now...it seems like there's a good chance that you won't have to miss them for very long. :) Thanks for reading/reviewing!


Reviewer: cae329 Signed Date: 11/19/06 - 11:00PM Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)

i loved this story from the start, and it was absolutely amazing, great job!


Author's Response: Why thank ya! :D


Reviewer: LoveYou2 Signed Date: 11/19/06 - 10:47PM Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)

*sobs* They got married! That's just great, girl! LOL @ Fionna's ramblings. They're meant to be! *sniff* I'm gonna miss this story! Fi and JT foeva! Great story, great ending! :D

Author's Response: Yep they got married. haha Though I had planned that all along, when it finally got there, I started to hesitate on it, haha but I went with it anyways. Would've caused me to have to think so more if I changed it...wouldn't want that. lol I'm not sure anymore if you're going to have to miss them any longer than you would have if you were waiting for the story to be updated. *shrugs* I'm already working on a new chapter, we'll see how that goes though. Thanks for reading/reviewing!


Reviewer: S Jane Signed Date: 11/04/06 - 10:47AM Title: Transparent (take two)

Great writing in this story i love it. Can't wait for an update it's gettin good hehe.

Author's Response: Aww, why thank ya! :] The update is on its way. Just getting good? haha, well it's about to be over once I post the next chapter. :( Thanks for reading/reviewing! 


Reviewer: classicbeauty Signed Date: 10/31/06 - 11:30AM Title: Transparent (take two)

wow i loved it and i cant wait for more! so when is that going to be? this weekend? lol just kidding. not really through ;op

 

dani

p.s. its almost over? so what is your new story going to be? cause im going to need a back up. im sorry, but once i find a amazing write i dont let go to easy. so if you need some ideas let me know,  lol later dayz - dani 



Author's Response: I know it's been a minute, but the next (and final :[) update should be up in the very near future. As for my next story, it's called "Tangled" but I don't know how soon I'm going to start posting that once "Best Of Me" is over, I tend to like to know most of what's going to happen before I start posting and right now I feel like there's still a lot of holes to fill up on that one. haha I love that you consider me one of the 'amazing' ones :D, I understand how you feel...once I really like a writer I want to read everything they've written and hope they just keep writing and never stop.. haha Anyways, thanks Dani, for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 10/23/06 - 07:09PM Title: Transparent (take two)

Really good chapter!!! I loved it!!! And I must say!!  THANK YOU GOD FOR FINALLY LETTING IT HAPPEN!!! IT TOOK THERE BITCH ASS SO LONG!!! I WAS GOING NUTS!! LOL I AM SO HAPPY TO READ THAT THEY ARE FINALLY SOMEWHAT PPEN ON AND BETTER TERMS WITH EACH OTHER!!! MY GOODNESS!! I LOVE YOUR STORY THOUGH AND I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT  CHAPTER!!! THE MUSIC WAS AWESOME GIRL!!!

 

TINA 



Author's Response: hahaha It did take them forever and a day, didn't it? But doesn't it make it that much more sweeter? No? Okay. haha Oh, that damn music...haha The songs lately have been pissing me off. It's like I've become incapable of choosing and the list of possibilities just keep growing and growing..haha I was about to take out the last song completely, but since that would require more work, I said, forget it. haha *shakes head* Anyways, thanks so much for reading/reviewing! It really does mean a lot. :)


Reviewer: Vegas Chick Signed Date: 10/23/06 - 06:51PM Title: Transparent

Great chapter!!! Poor Fionna!!Now I understand why she is the way she is...Awe I am so sorry for her! The bitch!! I wish her other family would have slapped the shitout of there mother or left her hanging or something...I don't understand why they didn't stand behind her. And try to stop her from leaving again! And omg Justin!! He drove the car off the road then it cought on fire and he was laughing while watching it burn and The Paprazzi didn't see this...Boy was he lucky!! lol...Boy is he taking Fionna's rejection really hard this time around..ok know I must read the next chapter to see what more darma is lying in wait for me to read! lol

 

Tina 



Author's Response: Y'all know that was just one chapter that wouldn't post all in one right? haha I should've put 'continued' vs. 'take two'. Anyways... Yeah, it would've been nice if the guys stood up for her. Paula may be the tiniest thing in house, but she's the biggest, strongest personality. She's definitely the HBIC (and unlike New York on Flavor of Love 2 she doesn't have to go around saying it, but everybody knows and acts accordingly). So yeah, when she starts screaming the menfolk just kinda freeze up. But in other things, against other people, they wouldn't hesitate to defend her. But then that's another kind of fighting entirely. They weren't there for the second time, so they couldn't stop her. She's not gone for good, at least not from their lives...Paula's is another story though. Yeah, he did that. It was stupid, but he wasn't just trippin off of Fionna, he says something along those lines in the chapter. There was a bunch of other things and I was going to add more stuff with Trace and Lynn, but didn't cause I was tired of thinking about this chapter. haha But it was one of those when it rains, it pours times. He laughed because he was still in shock and he was drunk. haha It's not for sure that some of the paparazzi didn't see though. *shrugs* Thanks for reading/reviewing!


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 10/23/06 - 06:00PM Title: Transparent (take two)

AWWWW!!!!!! 'Bout damn time y'all! Sheesh! I'm glad somebody could get her frustrations out.  And we shant go there on the whole Tom Cruise thing. *lol*

Author's Response: The Tom Cruise thing...haha I just wanted him to say something random, and then for some reason that's the name that popped in my head so I just went with it. haha


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 10/23/06 - 05:44PM Title: Transparent

WA-OOOOW!!!!! Her m...Paula is a real bitch.  She's such a bitch that when they tried to put her pic next to the word, the word got all Whitney Houston and was like, "HELL TO THE NAW!!!!!!", up and left.  Isn't being sickly supposed to make people all remorseful and wanting to right their wrongs? That's okay, Fionna doesn't need you anyway! *gives that heffa-ho Paula the bird* Ya know, if I was Fionna, I woulda told her that I hoped she died and burned in Hell...but that's just me.

Another brilliantly excellently crazy awesome chap.  Long as hell 'tho, I began reading it this morning, but had to leave out for class...and I wasn't even a fourth of the way done! *lol* In the words of Timberlake, "Jesus Pieces!". *lol* I'm suprised I finished it before the next century.  :o)



Author's Response: Lmao! Paula is pretty bitchy, but she does have a softer side but she can't (maybe closer to won't) show that to Fionna because she resents her too much. haha Fionna couldn't ever talk like that to her, that's like trying to say that to your mother. And even if technically Paula isn't her mom, she still couldn't go there with her.
Why, thank ya! Glad you enjoyed it despite all the typos (I re-reading after posting and started cringing so much that I was going to delete it and re-post it later haha). And yeah, it was ridick long, that's why it didn't fit in one and wound up posting like it was like it was two. haha I love the Jesus Pieces thing. haha I'm gonna start saying it myself one of these days. Don't worry though the next chapter should be waaay shorter. Thanks for reading/reviewing! 


Author's Response: Lawd, even talking about my typos I get typos...

EDITS: I re-read...

 wound up posting like it was two. 





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