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Reviewer: Timberlake
Signed
Date: 07/30/06 - 10:58PM
Title: The One That Got Away
Awwwww. WTF? He loves you, Fionna. He sorta said it. . . My goodness, he kicked ass for her and she still won't drop Richard. I loved this chapter. I really did. Justin was such a man in this. All that macho 'gotta protect my lady' stuff was cute. So cute Fioanna should drop Richy. And was that kiss number two? LMAO! Come on, Fi. Get that real love and sweaty sex you've always hoped for.
Author's Response: Yeah, I had him react just how I'd want my man to react to something like for me. But then I found out during RA training that that's not really how he should be acting. *shrugs* Oh, well. "Come on, Fi. Get that real love and sweaty sex you've always hoped for." LOL! That would be the smart thing to do... The new chapter is up so you can find out what she actually does.
Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: Vee
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/06 - 07:46PM
Title: The One That Got Away
AHHH. that completely made my weekend...that was perfect.
Author's Response: Aww, that's so nice to hear. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Trisha
Anonymous
Date: 07/29/06 - 11:42PM
Title: Circles & Triangles
So close but yet so far. Post more asap!
Author's Response: Yep. The next chapter is up! Enjoy!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Signed
Date: 07/29/06 - 10:54AM
Title: Circles & Triangles
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you TRYING to kill me? WTF? These two make me so damn sick!!!!! !#&&*%#&*%&#*#&* LMAO. Okay, okay. Deep breaths, Mari, LOL! Yo, this story is definitely hittin' for something. Justin POV was sooooooo awesome. I loved it as much as Fionna's. Jesus pieces, why is she doing this to him? To herself? She could have some Timberlovin' and she's passing it up and he needs to just flat out tell her he loves her curly hair and bitterness and doesn't need her to be all dolled up and perfect like she is for Richard. He just needs her. His Sugar Pie. . . Makes me sad for him. It really does, but at the same time I want him to gather his balls and fight for his woman. He's so obvious Janice saw through him. I mean, c'mon! Ugh. . . frustrated, I am, but I LOOOOOOOOOVVVVVEEEE this story! WOOT! lol. Update soon. . . like now. LOL Author's Response: LMAO! Now tell me how you really feel. haha I love that you're getting so into the story. It's really great that you're liking Justin's POV just as much as Fionna's because most of the time, Fionna's just comes so much more naturally for me than Justin's. I was nervous to even have the story be dual POV because I was so sure that my Justin POV would suck. haha I think you're going to get part of what you wanted in this chapter. And the rest in the next. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Veronica
Anonymous
Date: 07/29/06 - 02:48AM
Title: Circles & Triangles
Wow that was a grate update. I almost thought they were going to get together fo real towards the end but, it was still sweet I cant wait for more to come.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I wanted y'all to think that they were going to...only for it to be snatched away. haha I'm evil, I know. :) Well, there's more up right now. So enjoy! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Amy A
Anonymous
Date: 07/28/06 - 09:29PM
Title: Circles & Triangles
Have I ever told you i love this story? If not you should know I absolutly adore Justin and Fionna and i'm totally in love with this story, lol. This chapter was just beautiful i love your writing style and seriously can't wait to read more. I am sad about Fionna not giving into the trousersnake, lol, but having her crazy saddistic pride myself i guess i can empathise with her. I only hope she gets some common sense pronto. Update soonn xxx Author's Response: I think you might have, but I can always stand to hear it again and again. haha Thanks for the ego boost! :D Hope you enjoy the next chapter too.
Reviewer: princess
Anonymous
Date: 07/28/06 - 07:54PM
Title: Circles & Triangles
aww, ur killin me here. And for some reason she is making me upset, almost as if she is being selfish and hurting him on purpose. Great girl, don't keep us in suspense. More soon.
Author's Response: I think this next chapter should show that she's really not doing this on purpose just to hurt him. She has issues from her past that she needs to work through. One of those issues, I haven't even fully gotten to yet. But it's on its way, too. Anyways...thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Jaz
Anonymous
Date: 07/28/06 - 06:48PM
Title: Circles & Triangles
Yay! I can finally post after 8 years! So, Justin needs to succk it up and tell her how he feels! And it may not be on purpose but it seems shady how she's playing with dudes emotions. Ilike Justin! No Richard's still hot! But Justin's cool! Nah, Richard is the best! Oh wait, Justin's a good kisser! No, no, no I'm with Richard now. I wanna punch her! Stop hurting my man! I don't like sad Justin :( lol Anyway, she needs to make her mind up and choose Justin! Or, ya know you could put ME int he story and I could comfort Justin with my love! :D Ok, update SOON!
Author's Response: hahaha...reading part of your review as almost like part of the chapter I just posted. lol Fionna's just confused right now and fighting against that L-word. This next chapter is in her POV, so you should get some more insight on what's going on in her mind. Anyways...thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: maureen
Anonymous
Date: 07/28/06 - 03:15PM
Title: Circles & Triangles
love it. please don't leave me hanging like this. update soon!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope this update came soon enough. :)
Reviewer: jrtluva05
Signed
Date: 07/28/06 - 10:43AM
Title: Circles & Triangles
damn that was good.. gotta love jt.. especially when he is a lovesick puppy.. an i was really hopin things would turn out for him an finona.. but oh well.. update soon!
Author's Response: He even makes moping cute, doesn't he? haha Well, you never know what could happen by the end. Maybe they will get together. Maybe they won't. You'll just have to read to find out. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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