I'm with these two. I can't take too much more of this from Fionna and Justin! They're driving me up the wall. They both just need to give it up. I don't get how you can go from confessing your love to a guy you secretly take pictures of when he's sleeping to being with another guy and claiming that you're all for "the plan". LAME. Both of them! UGH lol I love this story even though the main characters are working my nerves.

Ugh!!! That was so not cool. Fiona needs to stop messing with the dudes emotions and Justin just needs to get some balls and confess. They're seriously pissing me off again. Great update.

Author's Response: Justin's not going to be singing 'These are my confessions' just yet...but it's coming. lol I like how you can go right from saying how they're pissing you off into 'great update' lol I guess that means that pissing you off is okay? haha Wonder what you're gonna think of this next chapter. Anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing!

Okay Justin, let's not be a pussy about this...sure, it's the "chivalrous" thing to do to let Fionna saunter away in the arms of Richard (who, by the way, can't be THAT good looking...I mean, most basketball players have some sort of paedophilia charge anyway so Fionna should just keep her distance...) but there are certain times where one must be selfish!  I know Fionna likes Richard and sure it must be difficult not to form a crush on a huge black gorgeous basketballer, (is that a word?  I dunno...) but her feelings for Justin must go deeper than for Richard.  How do we know it's just not a crush?  And crushes never last for ever so, in conclusion, I believe Fionna should stop being a wang about this and just go for Justin. Clear?  Course it is...lol  It took me ages to catch up with this story but it was so worth it, I was a fool to get so behind.  Can you believe its not on my favorite stories list?  Criminal! lol It's tiring to hear, but please update soon!

Author's Response: Glad to see you haven\'t become one of the Lost Ones! (a reader/review who just up and disappears) "(who, by the way, can\'t be THAT good looking...I mean, most basketball players have some sort of paedophilia charge" LMAO! Oh, lawd. *shakes head* No comment on that. haha. Well, if basketballer wasn\'t a word before, it is now. The only way to find out if it\'s really just a crush is for them to date and have her find out on own her. Maybe she\'ll go for Justin, when Cat goes for your Justin. lol :) So I\'ve made your favorite list? *does happy dance* "It\'s tiring to hear, but please update soon!" haha, I always end my reviews with \'update soon\' so I don\'t really have any room to complain if/when someone else does it. And this is how I always end my responses...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Creature of habit, who me? haha :)

oh this chapter broke my heart.  can i say that I am pissed off at fiona.  I am sure that she knows she hurt his feelings.  I understand why he let her go because that was what she wanted. Girl this is a breathtaking story.  I love it.  Please more soon.  Iam begging. 

Author's Response: Yeah, she knows she hurt his feelings. And even though it was all in Justin\'s POV, I think y\'all could get a sense that she didn\'t really want to do it and just felt like she had to. And her smile at the end, might not have been a happy one. If Justin would have really taken a good look at her, he might have noticed that. "Girl this is a breathtaking story." Aww, thank ya, thank ya! *cheeses all big* I\'m going to try to give y\'all more soon. I kinda want to finish this story before summer ends, and summer is rushin by me so fast. *sighs* Anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing!

I seriously can't believe they actually broke up! Why didn't they just TALK? Why couldn't Justin listen to Trace? Ugh they are so damn stupid. Great update girl.

Author's Response: Why talk when you can just break up? lol Makes everything so much simpler than way. haha No, but really, I agree, they are being stupid right now. Luckily, there\'s still a good amount of story left to tell, so *shrugs* who knows, they could both come back to their senses. Thanks for reading and reviewing!