Reviewer: vessySignedDate: 07/02/06 - 03:09PM
Title: On The Right Side
good work, i can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: TimberlakeSignedDate: 07/02/06 - 01:13PM
Title: On The Right Side
OMG! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH THEM? Damn it. It's there. The love is so profound and evident that them not saying so is just RIDICULOUS! Stupid people. Stupid, scared, shy, unwilling people! They make me mad. Love is scary, I get it. But damn it, they both know how the other feels. They need to just admit. Now. Then sex. Lots and lots of sex. LMFAO! Update soon. Like now. Now. LOL! I loved it. I love this story. And I'd love a thousand times more if you update really, really, really soon. lol
Author's Response: My third OMG in a row! lol Does that mean I\'m doing something right? haha "WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH THEM?" Hmm, maybe I spoke too soon. lol They\'re both stubborn and all those nice adjectives you gave them. lol And it\'s for all those reasons that they can\'t or won\'t make the moves to really be together. Plus, one or both of them is more than willing to hide behind the deal as an excuse they shouldn\'t even be thinking those kind of thoughts. I might wind up updating today (7.05.06) if I sit down and force myself to think about it and finish it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Amy A
AnonymousDate: 07/02/06 - 07:16AM
Title: On The Right Side
Omg! So close but yet so far. These guys are killing me with the suspense. I loved this update and seriously look forward to reading more. xxx
Author's Response: Yes, they were close. I don\'t think the next chapter will feel so suspenseful, but you\'ll get to find out soon enough. Cause I\'ll probably be posting it fairly soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: broken_souL
AnonymousDate: 07/02/06 - 03:33AM
Title: On The Right Side
OH MY GOD! You have to update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter. I don't understand why they just don't tell each other? Jesus!
Author's Response: lol The next chapter is in the works and I\'m going to be trying very hard to minimize the typos. Since chapter 13 made me cringe so much when I re-read it on here, with typo after typo. haha :/ I would have edited it on here, but the spacing gets all screwed up and that bothers me more. Anyways, in the next chapter they do take some decisive action. I\'m not telling what it is, but it\'s coming. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: deebee73SignedDate: 06/24/06 - 01:53PM
Title: Take That Leap
"Then lay some pimpin' down." Can I tell you how much I missed Lynn? She is just a trip in this story. I just want to lock Justin and Fionna in a room together and not let them out until they come to their senses. These two clowns are completely oblivious to the fact that they are falling in love with each other. Love it.
Author's Response: lol I missed Lynn too, that\'s why I brought her back. haha, that locking them in a room together idea might be good for a short story for them. :) Cause I\'ve already decided I\'m not doing a sequel, but a couple of shorties--sure. And yes, denial ain\'t just a river in Egypt. And I just updated. Hope you love the new one too! :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: Amy A
AnonymousDate: 06/23/06 - 03:14PM
Title: Take That Leap
Wow, this chapter was great i loved every part especially when Justin was talking to his mom, she went way too far, lol, i loved it, as well as the fresh prince reference, lol, I'll never forget when Trevor died. I only hope that Justin and Fiona were falling both literally and metaphorically? How long can they be in denial? Update soon.xxx
Author's Response: Yeah, she did. lol Justin and her have always been close, but ever since the divorce, she\'s kinda gotten looser with everything. So she doesn\'t notice the boundaries as much as she used to. She really just needs someone to talk to about everything. I guess I should give her some girlfriends. lol But then, with the story only being in Justin and Fionna\'s POVs you\'d never hear about it anyways. So I guess for now Justin\'s gonna have to stay his momma\'s girlfriend. haha I love Fresh Prince, but I struggled to remember what Hilary\'s boyfriend\'s name was. I was like \'what is it? Ted? Todd?\' Thankfully google saved the day. Yes, it was meant to be both literal and figurative falling. "How long can they be in denial?" lol That\'s the same thing I ask myself while I\'m watching Grey\'s Anatomy when it comes to McDreamy and Meredith. lol *shrugs* But we shall see. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jrtluva05SignedDate: 06/23/06 - 12:45PM
Title: Take That Leap
wow that was really good.. i hope fiona and justin stay together.. i love them i really do. an Sadie biting Richard haha that's what he gets lol jk can't wait for more..
Author's Response: I love them too, but I gotta bust \'em up for the sake of the deal sometime. haha, yeah, Sadie\'s not exactly a friendly dog. I had to bring her into the chapter, since I couldn\'t remember the last time I\'d talked about her at all. Can\'t let Fionna\'s job slip completely out of view. haha But, aww, Richard didn\'t deserve that. He\'s a nice guy, but you know what they say about nice guys. But then again, Justin\'s a nice guy...for the most part too. lol Anyways, thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Trisha
AnonymousDate: 06/23/06 - 02:09AM
Title: Take That Leap
i love it.. they are starting to realize their feeling for one another...it's great..post more asap!
Author's Response: Yep, they certainly are, but now it\'s a matter of what are they gonna do with these newfound feelings. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
AnonymousDate: 06/23/06 - 01:50AM
Title: Take That Leap
Have I told you that I love the way you write? I can't even find the words but it's amazing(lol). Anyway, Fionna and Justin need to stop messing around because they both know they want each other but they're not doing anything about it. great chapter hun.
Author's Response: Hmm. *thinks about it* If you did, I can\'t remember. But I can\'t remember a lot of things though. haha. But thanks so much for saying that! :D I know, I know, I think I\'m going to have them doing something about it two chapters from now, but I\'m not going to say whether you\'d like it or not. If anything, hopefully you\'ll like the way its written. haha Anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Veronica
AnonymousDate: 06/23/06 - 01:33AM
Title: Take That Leap
OMG awesome update. I really really really really really want Justin and Fiona to hook up for reals like none of this pretending mess. LOL
Author's Response: I don\'t know why the phrase \'for reals\' makes me laugh, but it does. Maybe I\'ll be nice and give everyone what they want. Maybe. mwhahahaha! :)lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
