*Tears* and this time they were happy tears. To the end at last... I think. You did say there would only be 22 chapters right? Anyway, I kinda wanted her and her mother to resolve all their differences but I guess not everything can be perfect. It wasn't the ending I was expecting but it was fucking awesome dude. I looooooooooooved it. Justin and Fionna have my heart and you do too girl. You are an incredible writer and I would love it if you would check out some of my work (it's kinda unfinished right now,lol) and tell me what you think. If you can't it's all good, I got other authors I can annoy with suggestions. Great story and hopefully you won't hesitate to work on a different project.
Author's Response: Nope that wasn't the end. I had tried to post it all in one shot, but since it was so long it got cut off. So that was all of one chapter, 21. Chapter 22 isn't finished yet, then the story will be over. Aww, thank you. :) When school gets off my back a little bit, I'll definitely come check out your work. haha, don't worry, I've been working on another story called "Tangled" which I'm trying to get ready so it can start to be posted after this one. Anyways, thanks for reading/reviewing!
I think this chapter was the most depressing of all. I love Fionna's brother's, they are something else. But her mom's a bitch. I don't like her at all. Fionna left cause of her and she's still treating her like shit. What a retard. I really hope they work things out though... I don't like all this crying I've been doing.lol.
Author's Response: It was pretty depressing, but I had to do it so it could be Fionna's redemption chapter...so you can get why she does the things she does. I love 'em too. They're like the brothers I wish I had, haha, not that I don't like my own brothers though. But two younger brothers, just aren't the same as having two older brothers. lol Yeah, Paula resents Fionna and what she represents and at first I just going to have that be it. But I don't think it is anymore. I think (mostly because of what I had Charlie say in the beginning) that once Fionna was gone she missed her, but once she comes back...*shrugs* It's a hate to love her, love to hate her thing, only so much worse because all Fionna wants is for her to love her.
Aw! Love is good! :D All we need is Love! All we need is Love! Love! love! Love is all we neeeddd! :D *sniffles* finally
Author's Response: haha Love is definitely good. No more sadness. At least not in this story. haha Maybe I'll torture them some more in a short short later on. haha :) Thanks for reading/reviewing! Just one more chapter to go! :/
Book Of Cheese & Corn by Justin Timberlake? LMFAO! OMG! YES! YES! YES! SEX NOW! LMFAO! I'm so happy. That first part was so depressing, but this SO makes up for it. I love you. I love Fionna. I love Justin. I love it all! WOOT!
Author's Response: If that was a real book, I'm sure it would a New York Times bestseller haha. Yes, there's sex (kinda lol) in the next chapter, but it just makes me laugh so I don't know how exciting that's gonna be. lol But I had to do it that way, it just wouldn't be me to do it the nicer way.
Oh my. Fi's mom's a bitch. Well, not mom, lady. . . idk. . this whole thing made me sad. all of it. how could someone be so cruel and uncaring? how could someone want something as simple as love and affection from the only mother she's ever known and not get it? why was there love from everyone else and not her? i now understand. i feel bad about all those remarks i made about her being stupid for not loving justin right back the way he deserves. how could she when someone who was suppose to love her unconditionally can't love her at all? =[
Author's Response: haha Yeah, I figured some of y'all would feel bad. Everytime y'all said something like that, I was thinking, if you only knew! haha Fionna definitely hasn't had it easy, but she definitely wouldn't want pity either. She's a tough cookie. Justin just had the right stuff to finally get her to crumble. haha Or least let her know it was okay to crumble sometimes. Anyways, thanks for reading/reviewing!
awesome!!!! please you can't leave me hanging like that. update soon please
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't know how soon I'll be updating, cause not that long after I posted chapter 21 I opened the document again to look at the last chapter...and all I did was stare at it for a few minutes and then closed it. haha But I'll definitely try not to have it take a long time. It won't be anywhere near as long as chapter 21 was. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
i loved everything and cant wait for more, so when you going to post girlie? im so into the story i cant get into reading anything else or anyone elses stories til i know what happens here. no please post asap. before i start dreaming it too
dani
Author's Response: haha I think this is one of the best compliments I've gotten. :D You don't even know how much it means to me that y'all are so into this. I'm definitely going to miss this story when it's done. Which it will be in one chapter. Anyways, you can stop dreaming haha, the new crazy long update is up! Thanks for reading/reviewing, Dani!
I CAN NOT BELIEVE YOU DID IT LIKE THAT!!! I AM SHOCKED AND PISSED AT FIONNA I THINK I WILL KICK HER ASS!!!! DAMN HER!!!! PLEASE TELL ME THAT JUSTIN IS GOING TO COME TO THE DOOR OR SOMETHING!!! JUST TELL ME THE GIRL IS GOING TO STOP RUNNING!!! YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE ASAP!! SORRY THAT I AM JUST NOW GETTING TO THE STORY...BUT I DIDN'T GET MY NORMAL UPDATE EMAIL...ANYWHO BACK TO KICKING HER ASS!!! WHICH I WOULD HAPPY DO!!! DAMNIT!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IS TO COME NEXT!!
TINA
Author's Response: haha I thought of all the chapters so far this would be the one that Fionna's ass would be safe from the kicking. haha Nope, he didn't come to door. But she wasn't running, 'cept to him. Well, I hope this next chapter you're happier with her. Thanks for reading/reviewing, Tina!
Reviewer: Amy A
AnonymousDate: 10/11/06 - 09:29AM
Title: Hopelessly Guilty
Aww, I love colorblind and this whole damn chapter finally that bitch has got some sense into her but what the hell was Justin doing? There is no way he has gotten over her already, she's just too cynical. Update soon xxx
Author's Response: I love that song too, it helped to inspire that last scene. haha Cynical is her middle name. Thanks for reading/reviewing, Amy!
I hate to say I told her so but come on... two months? Who does that? Who waits two months to tell someone you love them? She shouldn't be surprised that Justin didn't open the door for her. The ironic thing is that her ex-boyfriend, the one she left Justin for only to break up with thim (wow that's complicated) is the the one that helped her admit her love for him. Her and Richard are the weirdest couple EVER. Ok so maybe they're not as weird as Fionna and Justin but what was with that break up? I laughed my ass off cause that was freakin cheesy. I would love a break up like that. I mean it's rare that break ups don't end up in curse words, some broken objects and swollen lips (lol, maybe that's just my break ups). ANYWAY, I have a feeling Fionna just started her journey to SUFFER ACADEMY (I know it sounds stupid, don't hold it against me) and i can't wait to read the rest of it. And if Fionna and Justin have to end (which I hope to God doesn't happen) I hope you give them a moment of understanding like you gave Fionna and Richard. I loooooove those moments.
*sigh* I need to be concentrating on college chemistry but I can't when you've got my nerves all wound up. Hurry up woman, I'm dying here.lol.
Author's Response: "I hate to say I told her so..." Fionna would say, no, you don't. haha She wasn't planning on waiting two months, she was planning on not saying it at all. So two months is pretty good. haha Yeah, Richard's that self-sacrificing good guy, so once it got to the point where he couldn't ignore it anymore, he had to do what he did. Weird is good though, right? haha I loved their break-up, cause when do you ever hear of someone breaking up and singing and dancing to a Whitney Houston song? haha Only Richard and Fionna. Even Fionna acknowledged the weirdness of that though in that chapter. "it's rare that break ups don't end up in curse words, some broken objects and swollen lips (lol, maybe that's just my break ups)" LMAO! haha I think she's been attending that Suffer Academy for awhile. haha Sorry 'bout distracting you from your school work (lord knows I distract myself like crazy from my own), but you don't have to wait anymore cause the newness is up! Thanks for reading/reviewing! Hopefully you haven't already died on me. haha
