Reviewer: Memyself
AnonymousDate: 07/29/05 - 12:53AM
Title: Equals Five
Oh I'm first! Hmm, Janice is ..special lol
Fionna needs and attitude adjustment. What's her deal, yo? She's lucky I'm not in this story or I might have to tell her something! No, I'm just kidding lol I like this story so far. More soon!
Author's Response: lol I think you were first for the last chapter too. Janice is supposed to be the 'normal' one between the two lol guess I'll have to work on making her more 'normal'...whatever that is. Ah, Fionna, you don't appreciate her sarcasm? lol Well there's a reason she is the way she is, her life wasn't all that great. But thanks for still liking it and thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate it! :D
Reviewer: Nique
AnonymousDate: 07/25/05 - 12:23PM
Title: At First Sight
Leave it to Justin to be a block-head that wants A LOT of attention. What, is she not good enough to watch his dog, just because she doesn't know his favorite color? I love, love, loooove Fiona!!!! Gotta have someone cut buddy boy down to size. Oh, and as much as he travels and tours, Imma need for him to know more than "where is the bathroom". I took Spanish for only 2yrs (and that was literally a decade ago), and I knew what Fionna said. *shakes head* Ha! But, I still love it.
Author's Response: lol I'm glad you like her so much. lol Yeah, I meant to make the spanish a little more complicated than that but I couldn't think of anything. lol So um, yeah that wound up making him stupider than he already did. Ah well. Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 07/24/05 - 09:50PM
Title: At First Sight
HAHAH, well I basically made all my comments to you as I edited this chapter, but once again, I'll go ahead and review cus I'm just the shit like that. Anyways, this chapter was absolutely hilarious. I don't know why you didn't wanna post it...crazy slut. The whole part about Justin calling her a giraffe? (Shamless laugh) I mean so fucking great, yet so fucking rude at the same time. I couldn't help but snort though. And you gotta love Justin and his profound ass: "Nice colors and shit." Wow, you go boy! That was a nice analysis right thurr, baby boy. ROFL. Anyways...Justin is special, but I still love him. Fi is the shit (ha, I called her Fi and she would hate that, but OH WELL) and I can't wait to see how this all plays out. I know what's gonna happen, but at the same time, I still wanna read it and find out. Ain't it grand? LOL. You best be sending me these cahpters in advance though, cus I'm just special like that, got it? I want an update on this a.s.a.p, btw. Oh and don't think that god damned bet has expired. I will consider that you can update either and/or BOM or EIB as I update JOY but that's as nice as it's gonna get heffa. Whee...you gotta update soon though, cus you were just BORRRRRRN to make me hapy, and i'm so LUCCCCCKY like that......cus im a star. ROFL. ok ok so i couldn't figure a way to use those ones either. sue me, bitch. rofl loves ya!!
Author's Response: Well maybe I didn't want to post it cause I'm a crazy slut. lol Justin's a really sensitive and intellectual guy, I'm glad you noticed that about him cause I wasn't trying to overwhelm y'all with the magnitude of his full deepness just yet. lol In one sentence you reminded me of two songs. First one being obvious...Chingy's 'right thurr' and the Tyese's 'just a baby boy.' Yes, you'll be getting them in advance because you are 'special.' lol And whhhhhhyy can't it expire?!? lol Alright, I'll try to update...if I must. *sighs* Thanks for the lovely review, even though you're so demanding I guess I still like your slutty bitch self. :)
ROFL, bitch, you know good and well that I love this story to pieces already, but I'll go ahead and be nice and review just for the HELL of it. First of all, LMAO, how in FUCK do you come up with all these phobias and shit? I mean, I seriously hope you research this shit as you write it, and don't just know it by heart....ahahah crazy biotch! Gotta love it! LOL. I'm loving this story ...I mean what else can I say? The shout out at the starting was lovely, of course you had to dedicate this to your one and only bitch, aka moi. Jill's Heels. HA. Nice rhyming there, and I just love how the girl is 6'0. Dayum, girl is STACKED lmfao. (I don't know where that came from exactly so don't ask. I'm sure I used it wrong, I know...I know...I try to be ghetto and I fail miserably.) I would go on and do my whole Britney Spears ending for you on this review, but I'm gonna be nice a refrain this time. Tra LA LA ---la de dee da da...on to review the next chapter of this beautifuly fantastic and FUCKING awesome story. =)
Author's Response: lol I'm crazy but I'm not THAT crazy, of course I had to research it. There was like a gallizon million of them to pick from. And thanks for sparing me from the Spear Me ending lol. Even though I did think it was funny. You drive me crazy...lol now I'm about to listen to 'Born To Make You Happy'...and it's all your damn fault. You're corrupting me with all your Britney loving ways. lol And thanks for the beautifully fantastic and FUCKING awesome review! lol =)
Reviewer: Nikki G.
AnonymousDate: 07/24/05 - 07:24AM
Title: At First Sight
Cute. Update soon and thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update 'soon.' lol Thanks again for the review!
Reviewer: Teeny
AnonymousDate: 07/24/05 - 03:13AM
Title: At First Sight
His indepth analytic approach to art is really special...."nice colors and shit" (actually I say the same thing, but let's just keep schtum). And calling a girl a giraffe is NOT the way to charm her, but then again Fionna seriously doesn't sound like a girl who wants to be charmed which is awesome because we all get a good laugh at Justin's expense when he tries to pull moves on her. "What's my favorite color?" honestly Justin, who cares?! Anyway, as you can tell I'm already heavily involved in this story, Fionna seems like my twin and I can't wait to see where this goes! Oh, and before this drives me crazy, did she say the pleasure is mine "Senor Justin"? That'll annoy me ALL day!
Author's Response: lol Yeah, I was trying to make him seem real deep and intellectual, does it show? lol Well he's not trying to charm her yet, though when he does she's not going to make it easy for him. She said the pleasure is mine 'Senor Timberlake' but yeah, basically what you said. lol But anyways thanks for liking it so far and thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Oh and Senor though without the tilde (however it's spelled) over the n, but it's supposed to be Senor Timberlake...as in Mr. Timberlake.
Reviewer: Gigi
AnonymousDate: 07/24/05 - 01:15AM
Title: At First Sight
Oh yeah her name's Fionna!?!
Author's Response: Uh-huh. Don't like that name either? lol
Reviewer: Gigi
AnonymousDate: 07/24/05 - 01:14AM
Title: At First Sight
Great chapter I don't what to comment on first. Yeah that giraffe comment was a little harsh. And his dog's name is Sadie?huh. Also how used 'Love is Battlefield' I love that song. I know there something I'm probably missing so I'm gonna go re-read it right now. lol.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yep the dog's name is Sadie. Why, bad name? lol Yeah, I like that song too and I'd just recently got to hear it after being forced to watch '13 Going On 30' lol so I decided to throw it in there. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Memyself
AnonymousDate: 07/24/05 - 12:20AM
Title: At First Sight
A giraffe?! lol That's kinda harsh lol Oh well, cute update. She's a smart aleck huh? Hmm, we'll see about that. More soon
Author's Response: Yeah that was kind of harsh lol, but this is still the superficial Justin phase. He'll change for the better as the story goes on, or at least that's what I'm going to try to make him do. lol We'll see how that goes. But anyways thanks for the review and I already have the next chapter in the works.
