Reviewer: Nique
AnonymousDate: 08/29/06 - 06:21PM
Title: On The Right Side
Awww!!!! I don't remember what the hell I was going to say about the other three-fourths of the story, thanks to the end. They wuv each other, but are too afraid to fully admit it to themselves and each other. I found it smashingly adorable. Awwww!!!! Richard and Janice who?!?!?! Oh yea, I remember now, lol at Christina Ricci's nutso ass. "Country bumpkin sleep over gear." *lmao* Then again, we should be thanking the psycho for helping to intensify both Justin and Fionna's feelings for one another.
Author's Response: haha Well, at first it was supposed to two separate chapters, but with the last part I couldn't think of anything to do to extend it and I didn't want it to be really short so I just combined the two. "Richard and Janice who?!?!?!" yeah, I did kinda leave them out for awhile, didn't I? haha I got sucked up into the Jufi love swirl for a bit. haha Yep, even the crazies have some good points. lol Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: Nique
AnonymousDate: 08/29/06 - 05:13PM
Title: Take That Leap
Aw sookie-sookie now!!! Mm-hmm, it's on now! Great, now you got me sounding all ghetto. *lol* *ahem* I mean, well, well, well, it seems that someone has...scratch that...uh-oh, it's ON NOW!!!! Woop-woop. Get 'em Fi! *lmao* Ne-hoo. I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought that that episode of "Fresh Prince" was a warning to black people.
Author's Response: LOL, Girl, you're a trip. haha Don't afraid to let a little ghettoness shine every now and then. haha That's exactly what it was to me and that's all the warning I need. lol Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: Nique
AnonymousDate: 08/29/06 - 04:24PM
Title: A Little Less You & Me
GOODNESS!!!!! I missed ALL THIS over my vay-kay?!?!?!?! Man oh man, I suck royally. He kissed her like 8 kajillion times!!!!! Yup, Justin's got a love jones for Fiona's body and her skin tone. Now, excuse me while I go play mustard.
Author's Response: Look who's returned from her stint as a Lost One! haha :) At first I was like 'play mustard? how do you play mustard?' haha Then I got it...haha It's okay to be a little slow sometimes. :] Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: Veronica
AnonymousDate: 08/28/06 - 10:17AM
Title: Price For Living
Wow!! gurl excellent I can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, more is hopefully on the way! :)
Reviewer: maureen
AnonymousDate: 08/27/06 - 08:40PM
Title: Price For Living
AWESOME!!!!!more soon please
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
AnonymousDate: 08/27/06 - 08:39PM
Title: Price For Living
Okay Fiona just turned into the worst in love character I have encountered so far on this site. What is wrong with that chick? Seriously why would she hurt Justin like that? He finally got enough courage to tell her his feelings and she shot him down before he could get anything out. Ugh! Ugh!! Ugh! And poor Sadie!!! I really liked this update (especially the so called strip tease) but you need to change Fionna's attitude ASAP or else!!!lol. I'm kidding. But for reals girl... put me out of my damn misery!
Author's Response:
Oh and the Fionna hatred continues...haha yeah...the strip tease...no idea where that came from. And clearly I know nothing about them. I was like 'should it be more teasing and less stripping or more stripping with less tease?' haha *shrugs* I don't want to get anybody's hopes up, but Fionna might come around. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: Mari (timberlake)
AnonymousDate: 08/27/06 - 08:24PM
Title: Price For Living
omg, what the fuck????? he was about to say it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FIONNA I OFFICIALLY HATE YOU! LMAO. I quit? She quits???? What kind of mess is that? Who does that? Punk ass bitches do that! LOL. I'm pissed. She showed him the goods and she still said no? I think she's the crackhead Lynn was referring to. She has to be. Drugs is the only good excuse she could have for being this STUPID! ugh. Poor Justin. He needs to handcuff her to his bed and show her the loving rather than say it, LMAO! Oh and yes, it was I who nominated you, my dear, haha.
Author's Response: You hate her? *gasps* haha If Fionna had tear ducts I'm sure she would cry. lmao "I think she's the crackhead Lynn was referring to. " LOL Girl, your reviews always crack me up. And thanks again for the nominations, old and new. haha 'Preciate that! Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: kahlymillaSignedDate: 08/27/06 - 03:33PM
Title: The Beautiful People
Honey bunches of oats! I used to love when Lorrianne said that on Making the Band, lol. Lord, she's not crushing on this Richard guy is she? Please say it isn't so. But I considering Justin smelled like seasoned sweat just now, I don't blame her.
I'll catch up on the other chapters later though because right now I'm starving like Marvin and need to eat, feel me?
Author's Response: haha I can't remember her saying that. I remember the boom, boom, cat thing she liked to say though. Oh, no, already you're not cool with Richard? haha It's all part of the deal. Well, I hope to hear from you again whenever you get around to reading the next few chapters. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: kahlymillaSignedDate: 08/27/06 - 02:30PM
Title: Equals Five
Lmao, Janice is a trip! I thought I was the only one who wanted her to shut up. But obviously Fionna was thinking the same thing. Glad she screamed. But she was with that so Lord help here. As for Justin and his dog, wow. He is kind of bordline obsessed with Sadie. But I like how he is toward, Fi, oh sorry Fionna, lmao. He kind of makes it hard for her not to like him.
Off to the next chapters.
Author's Response: Janice definitely knows how to ramble. haha Your dog comment made me re-read, but yeah...he loves him some Sadie. haha I think in general it would be hard not to like Justin, I mean...c'mon, it's Justin. haha Fionna's a tough cookie to crumble though. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: kahlymillaSignedDate: 08/27/06 - 02:03PM
Title: At First Sight
So I came across this when I was searching for something good to read. But, I have 17 chapters to read, Goody. Lol, I'm kidding. The amount of chapters doesn't bother me as long as the story is good. And yours is. I see why you have so many reviews. The plot is on point as well as the characters. I especially like Fiona's character. She is nonchalant-sarcastic. Loves it! That's a mirror of me right there (well, actually my twin is a mirror of me, but you know what I mean, lmao) Anyway, I just love her background, all the stuff that happened to her is presented in a funny way because of her attitude but's it's really not funny at all. I feel for her actually. But, on the other hand I glad she didn't let it get the best of her. As far Justin, I can already tell he's gonna be a jerk. "Her nervousness was kind of cute, in a girl giraffe kind of way." Giraffe kind of way? That's was so uneccessary, lol. But that's him. I'm anxious to read the next few chapters. I'll leave a review every few chapters so you can know what I think periodically, cool?
Author's Response: Aww, I love getting new readers/reviewers! Yeah, me too...I love sarcastic main characters, maybe cause that's how I am. Makes it easier to relate/write. haha Yeah, in the beginning he was a jerk. But still a likeable one, I think. haha Thanks for reading/reviewing and giving this story a shot! :D
