Reviewer: Nique
AnonymousDate: 08/29/06 - 07:12PM
Title: Make Believe
UGH!!!! Even Trace's stumpy-ass couldn't help bring their lovin' to finally bubbly to the surface and froth over?!?!?!?! And I can't believe His punk-ass let Mista Balla Man push him aside! You see that you really hurted (yes hurted) her...not for fake, but for real...and you don't even try to escort her someplace where your idiotic self could apologize?!?!?! Stupid boy! He's lucky I feel sad for him, or else I'd really let him have it.
Author's Response: "You see that you really hurted (yes hurted) her" haha, I could have sworn that's what Keyshia Cole says in "Love" (I can't believe you hurted me, I met your girl...yadda yadda haha), but apparently it's 'you're hurting me.' That's not what I hear though. Anyways...I'm glad you noticed that she was hurt from all that too. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: deebee73SignedDate: 08/27/06 - 09:40AM
Title: Make Believe
First of all, Trace and Justin are hilarious together. Second of all, how could Justin just give up like that? I'm devastated. YOu know you've got to fix this right?
Author's Response: First of all, thank you. Comments like that is what usually causes me to re-read the chapters so I can remember what the hell happened. haha Second of all, I dunno...I just liked that "I'm giving up" scene. haha Fixing it? Bleh...haha I'm too evil to do something like that. lol :) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: TeenySignedDate: 07/09/06 - 07:06AM
Title: Make Believe
Okay Justin, let's not be a pussy about this...sure, it's the "chivalrous" thing to do to let Fionna saunter away in the arms of Richard (who, by the way, can't be THAT good looking...I mean, most basketball players have some sort of paedophilia charge anyway so Fionna should just keep her distance...) but there are certain times where one must be selfish! I know Fionna likes Richard and sure it must be difficult not to form a crush on a huge black gorgeous basketballer, (is that a word? I dunno...) but her feelings for Justin must go deeper than for Richard. How do we know it's just not a crush? And crushes never last for ever so, in conclusion, I believe Fionna should stop being a wang about this and just go for Justin. Clear? Course it is...lol It took me ages to catch up with this story but it was so worth it, I was a fool to get so behind. Can you believe its not on my favorite stories list? Criminal! lol It's tiring to hear, but please update soon!
Author's Response: Glad to see you haven\'t become one of the Lost Ones! (a reader/review who just up and disappears) "(who, by the way, can\'t be THAT good looking...I mean, most basketball players have some sort of paedophilia charge" LMAO! Oh, lawd. *shakes head* No comment on that. haha. Well, if basketballer wasn\'t a word before, it is now. The only way to find out if it\'s really just a crush is for them to date and have her find out on own her. Maybe she\'ll go for Justin, when Cat goes for your Justin. lol :) So I\'ve made your favorite list? *does happy dance* "It\'s tiring to hear, but please update soon!" haha, I always end my reviews with \'update soon\' so I don\'t really have any room to complain if/when someone else does it. And this is how I always end my responses... Thanks for reading and reviewing! Creature of habit, who me? haha :)
Reviewer: Trisha
AnonymousDate: 07/08/06 - 01:32PM
Title: Make Believe
Poor Justin...i feel so sorry for him. great chapter post more soon
Author's Response: I can just feel Fionna rolling her eyes, but I gotta keep reminding her it\'s not her turn right now. haha It\'s Justin\'s turn and he can make it as melodramatic as he wants. *thinks about the last few lines of chapter 14 and Fionna rolls her eyes again* lol God, I hope that didn\'t sound schizo... lol It\'s a writer\'s thing, I guess. Yeah, I\'ll go with that. haha Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
AnonymousDate: 07/08/06 - 02:37AM
Title: Make Believe
I seriously can't believe they actually broke up! Why didn't they just TALK? Why couldn't Justin listen to Trace? Ugh they are so damn stupid. Great update girl.
Author's Response: Why talk when you can just break up? lol Makes everything so much simpler than way. haha No, but really, I agree, they are being stupid right now. Luckily, there\'s still a good amount of story left to tell, so *shrugs* who knows, they could both come back to their senses. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Joanna
AnonymousDate: 07/08/06 - 12:28AM
Title: Make Believe
I loved the new chapter. u definitely have me craving for more!!! can't wait!
Author's Response: Two cravers...I feel like White Castle or something. haha Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Ashley
AnonymousDate: 07/07/06 - 11:42PM
Title: Make Believe
Awesome chapter! You have me craving for more. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Hmm, I wonder if you\'re the Ashley, that I think you might be. But since I can\'t be sure, since it\'s not signed, I\'m not going to say anything to make a fool of myself. lol Anyways, thanks! I\'m going to try to keep the updates coming at a regular pace. So again, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Amy A
AnonymousDate: 07/07/06 - 11:19PM
Title: Make Believe
That was wow...so deep. Justin must really love her to let her go. But why is she being so stubborn!? Why does she want richards cheap ass when she can have the beauty that is Justin. Justin is better off w/out her cause that bitch is crazy (although i still want them together, lol) Update soon because i'm dying for another fix. xxx
Author's Response: When I first read this, I was like \'Richard\'s not cheap!\' lol Then I re-read, and duct-taped shoes, dollar store looking sword...so yeah, I guess that does make him cheap. But remember the sword bit might just be Justin\'s opinion. lol "Justin is better off w/out her cause that bitch is crazy" Wow, them there\'s fighting words. haha I kinda felt Fionna flare up for a second, but since this is Justin\'s time to speak, I held her tongue. lol Anyways, I hope you don\'t really feel that way. Fionna\'s not as in touch with her emotions as Justin is and whatever she is feeling, she\'s pushing aside and sticking to the deal. Don\'t die on me while you wait for the next chapter! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: TimberlakeSignedDate: 07/07/06 - 11:19PM
Title: Make Believe
awwwwwwwwwwwwww, NO! What the fuck? STOP! STOP IT! LOL! It hurts me too. Trace's hobbit ass had a point. Justin's a bitch. A big ol' dumb bitch, LOL! He should've said something. . .anything. Jesus pieces, she GLOWS for him. GLOWS! LOL! Ugh, I'm babbling. I'm so upset. . . Jesus pieces. . .
Author's Response: lol Your reviews are hilarious. haha "It hurts me too." It wasn\'t meant to cause pain. Okay, well, actually I guess it was. But only a little bit. mwhahaha Trace was trying to be the voice of reason. But how serious can you take a little man dressed in a hobbit costume? lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: broken_souL
AnonymousDate: 07/07/06 - 11:09PM
Title: Make Believe
WHAT THE FUCK ?! Okay, Justin is in love with Fionna. And Fionna is in love with Justin. Why the hell are they making it so hard on themselves? Why the hell is Justin making it so hard on himself? He knows she feels the same way! OH MY GOD ! I want to strangle the both of them! And then shove 'em in a room and make them how some passionate love making! Sheesh. Update soon.
Author's Response: I think someone you might not necessarily expect to say it is gonna express some of your exact thoughts in the next chapter. Minus the strangling bit. lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
