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Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 08/29/06 - 07:53PM
Title: Circles & Triangles
Ugh. Next chapter. But, before I go, I must say that I feel for poor Justin. If only he'd listen to good ol' stumps a couple of chapters back. Oh, and what is up with that whole Fionna and Richard hooking up less than three weeks after she and Justin "broke up"? Hell-o, that looks suspicious...I guess not in Cali where everybody's brains has fried in the sun. And how dare Richard just stroll on up and take her! I know I was all gung-ho for them to get together in the beginning, but now I want my Fi and Juju. Boooo!!!! :o( It was still a good chap though.
Author's Response: "good ol' stumps" haha You come up with the best nicknames. lol Lawd, I should make a character just for you. She would be hilarious. Her name would be something creative like...Nique. haha Yeah, that was soon wasn't it? I hesitated on doing that, but I guess I went with it...cause Fionna needed to jump into a new relationship to make it easier for her to push Justin away. At least he asked first. haha That makes it better, right? Don't you just hate it when someone takes your food and starts eating it and then asks 'Oh, can I have this?' Like you're gonna want it back then. *rolls eyes* haha But Richard didn't do it that way, he asked THEN he took. See...haha Jufi is cute, but c'mon...give Rifi a chance. haha
Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: deebee73
Signed
Date: 08/27/06 - 09:51AM
Title: Circles & Triangles
You know you're wrong for that. I thought we were getting somewhere, but I should have known that it wouldn't be that easy.
Author's Response: hahaha Hey, I couldn't let them go all the way. There's Richard and the deal still left to consider. Plus if they really do share a moment like that in the future, then wouldn't all this agonizing make it more enjoyable in the end? No? Oh, okay. lol Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: Vegas Chick
Signed
Date: 07/31/06 - 03:10PM
Title: Circles & Triangles
MY POOR BABY!!! AWWWW POOR J!!! I FEEL SO BAD FOR HIM!!! BOY WAS THIS A GOOD CHAPTER!!! KNOW I AM OFF TO THE NEXT ONE!! LOL
Reviewer: Vegas Chick
Signed
Date: 07/31/06 - 03:10PM
Title: Circles & Triangles
MY POOR BABY!!! AWWWW POOR J!!! I FEEL SO BAD FOR HIM!!! BOY WAS THIS A GOOD CHAPTER!!! KNOW I AM OFF TO THE NEXT ONE!! LOL
Author's Response: Yeah, that was a sad chapter for Justin. But I'm glad you liked it anyways.
Reviewer: Trisha
Anonymous
Date: 07/29/06 - 11:42PM
Title: Circles & Triangles
So close but yet so far. Post more asap!
Author's Response: Yep. The next chapter is up! Enjoy!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Signed
Date: 07/29/06 - 10:54AM
Title: Circles & Triangles
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you TRYING to kill me? WTF? These two make me so damn sick!!!!! !#&&*%#&*%&#*#&* LMAO. Okay, okay. Deep breaths, Mari, LOL! Yo, this story is definitely hittin' for something. Justin POV was sooooooo awesome. I loved it as much as Fionna's. Jesus pieces, why is she doing this to him? To herself? She could have some Timberlovin' and she's passing it up and he needs to just flat out tell her he loves her curly hair and bitterness and doesn't need her to be all dolled up and perfect like she is for Richard. He just needs her. His Sugar Pie. . . Makes me sad for him. It really does, but at the same time I want him to gather his balls and fight for his woman. He's so obvious Janice saw through him. I mean, c'mon! Ugh. . . frustrated, I am, but I LOOOOOOOOOVVVVVEEEE this story! WOOT! lol. Update soon. . . like now. LOL Author's Response: LMAO! Now tell me how you really feel. haha I love that you're getting so into the story. It's really great that you're liking Justin's POV just as much as Fionna's because most of the time, Fionna's just comes so much more naturally for me than Justin's. I was nervous to even have the story be dual POV because I was so sure that my Justin POV would suck. haha I think you're going to get part of what you wanted in this chapter. And the rest in the next. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Veronica
Anonymous
Date: 07/29/06 - 02:48AM
Title: Circles & Triangles
Wow that was a grate update. I almost thought they were going to get together fo real towards the end but, it was still sweet I cant wait for more to come.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I wanted y'all to think that they were going to...only for it to be snatched away. haha I'm evil, I know. :) Well, there's more up right now. So enjoy! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Amy A
Anonymous
Date: 07/28/06 - 09:29PM
Title: Circles & Triangles
Have I ever told you i love this story? If not you should know I absolutly adore Justin and Fionna and i'm totally in love with this story, lol. This chapter was just beautiful i love your writing style and seriously can't wait to read more. I am sad about Fionna not giving into the trousersnake, lol, but having her crazy saddistic pride myself i guess i can empathise with her. I only hope she gets some common sense pronto. Update soonn xxx Author's Response: I think you might have, but I can always stand to hear it again and again. haha Thanks for the ego boost! :D Hope you enjoy the next chapter too.
Reviewer: princess
Anonymous
Date: 07/28/06 - 07:54PM
Title: Circles & Triangles
aww, ur killin me here. And for some reason she is making me upset, almost as if she is being selfish and hurting him on purpose. Great girl, don't keep us in suspense. More soon.
Author's Response: I think this next chapter should show that she's really not doing this on purpose just to hurt him. She has issues from her past that she needs to work through. One of those issues, I haven't even fully gotten to yet. But it's on its way, too. Anyways...thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Jaz
Anonymous
Date: 07/28/06 - 06:48PM
Title: Circles & Triangles
Yay! I can finally post after 8 years! So, Justin needs to succk it up and tell her how he feels! And it may not be on purpose but it seems shady how she's playing with dudes emotions. Ilike Justin! No Richard's still hot! But Justin's cool! Nah, Richard is the best! Oh wait, Justin's a good kisser! No, no, no I'm with Richard now. I wanna punch her! Stop hurting my man! I don't like sad Justin :( lol Anyway, she needs to make her mind up and choose Justin! Or, ya know you could put ME int he story and I could comfort Justin with my love! :D Ok, update SOON!
Author's Response: hahaha...reading part of your review as almost like part of the chapter I just posted. lol Fionna's just confused right now and fighting against that L-word. This next chapter is in her POV, so you should get some more insight on what's going on in her mind. Anyways...thanks for reading and reviewing!
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