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Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 08/29/06 - 09:04PM
Title: The One That Got Away
Yes, he finally told her! But of course she has too many emotions occupying her brain to under stand it. Whoo, for a moment I thought Justy might be chillaxing next to Shyne. I'm glad Martin is still -barely- alive.
Author's Response: I think she did understand it but with everything that had happened...she was still shaken from the Martin thing at the club, plus the fight. And even if that hadn't happened, ever since her first encounter with Martin she was more likely to push folks away than embrace them anyways. But right then, after all that, she was just extra emotional and didn't know what to think. And Justin doing what he did, just started the beginning of a whole change in the way she'll look at him in the future. "Whoo, for a moment I thought Justy might be chillaxing next to Shyne. " Is Shyne still locked up? haha *shakes head* seems like everybody (rappers) gotta take their turn going that route. What happened with ratboy aka Young Buck?
Reviewer: Dolphin_Lover
Signed
Date: 08/10/06 - 10:37PM
Title: The One That Got Away
Please update sooooooooooon. I Love this story and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I've finally updated...sorry it took so long. Thanks for reading and reviewing though! I definitely appreciate it and hopefully I'll hear from you again. :)
Reviewer: Trisha
Anonymous
Date: 08/01/06 - 02:13PM
Title: The One That Got Away
wonderful chapter, keep em rollin.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Vegas Chick
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Date: 07/31/06 - 04:16PM
Title: The One That Got Away
I loved it!! I really loved that Justin kick that jerks ass!!! I love him even more now in this story for that....lol...This was really good chapter!! I am just loving the way the story is going and I am looking forward to finding out what is to come and when Fionna is going to finally fessup to her feelings for justin...lol...so update again soon!!! Author's Response: Yeah, the idea of a man kicking ass for you...I dunno that just appeals to me. lol So I had to have Justin do that for Fionna, although now I'm thinking maybe I should have had Richard doing it to help out his likeability factor. haha Although, he's already pretty damn likeable to me, it's just the whole...love triangle thing that's not helping his popularity. Anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing! In the next chapter, I just posted...there is some fessing up of feelings. I just won't say who did it and how it all played it. You'll just have to read and find out. ;)
Reviewer: jrtluva05
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Date: 07/31/06 - 03:06PM
Title: The One That Got Away
damn that shit was intense!! i loved it girl!! can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I wanted the fight scene to be intense. lol I can't really remember the rest right now, sometimes I have to go back and re-read my own story. lol Anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing! More is up now. Enjoy! :D
Reviewer: Amy A
Anonymous
Date: 07/31/06 - 07:50AM
Title: The One That Got Away
Another great chapter and i'm glad Justin beat that bastard up, he deserved that and a whole lot more. But yet again so close, they were so close and yet so far. I only wish Richard would go on holiday or just disappear altogether, lol. I love this story, update soon, hun. xxx
Author's Response: Aww, dang does anybody like Richard besides me? haha Anyways, thanks for reading/reviewing! I've updated...not soon, but at least I did it. lol :)
Reviewer: Jaz
Anonymous
Date: 07/31/06 - 02:26AM
Title: The One That Got Away
Man! She's crazy! She obviously don't want Richard! She's just scared because she got really strong feelings for Justin! Haha, he got beat up! *giggles* Anyway, yea! They need to hook up pronto! ugh! More soon! I like the fast update!
Author's Response: Well, you got it mostly right. haha She is crazy for not going with Justin. But I think she does want Richard, maybe not entirely for all the right reasons though. Yeah, so this wasn't exactly a fast update...sorry about that. lol Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 07/31/06 - 01:57AM
Title: The One That Got Away
Richard really does need to get a clue.
Author's Response: Yep. :) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/06 - 11:21PM
Title: The One That Got Away
That was an interesting fight to read. That guy seriously needed that ass beating and Richard needs to get a clue. Where the hell was he? Anywayz, great chapter girl.
Author's Response: I hope that's a good interesting. haha And not one of those 'that was...uh, interesting' haha kinda things. I hesitated on the fight scene just because I've never written one and I was almost certain I was going to screw it up. I've read so many good fight scenes you'd think I could write a decent one...*sighs* But yeah, Martin needed his ass kicked, so I tried my best to make that scene halfway decent. And about Richard's whereabouts, to be perfectly honest I don't know where he was haha. I just needed to get rid of him, so Justin could be the hero. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Timberlake
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Date: 07/30/06 - 10:58PM
Title: The One That Got Away
Awwwww. WTF? He loves you, Fionna. He sorta said it. . . My goodness, he kicked ass for her and she still won't drop Richard. I loved this chapter. I really did. Justin was such a man in this. All that macho 'gotta protect my lady' stuff was cute. So cute Fioanna should drop Richy. And was that kiss number two? LMAO! Come on, Fi. Get that real love and sweaty sex you've always hoped for.
Author's Response: Yeah, I had him react just how I'd want my man to react to something like for me. But then I found out during RA training that that's not really how he should be acting. *shrugs* Oh, well. "Come on, Fi. Get that real love and sweaty sex you've always hoped for." LOL! That would be the smart thing to do... The new chapter is up so you can find out what she actually does.
Thanks for reading/reviewing!
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