GOD, this makes me sooooooooo sad. HE SAID IT! He finally gathered up his damn timberballs and said 'I love you', not once, but TWICE in the same romantic rambling. . . ugh, and what does the dumb hoe do? Reject him, even as he stood there was his fragile heart in his hands, ready and willing to give it to her if only she ask. That makes me sad. VERY sad. You don't understand how much I love these characters. I know it's all pretend, but damn it, I love 'em. Girl, I don't even have a computer (the damn thing busted two or three days ago), but I found a way to the library and printed the 18 pages you typed in the last three minutes I had left on my timer, LMAO. I think I'm addicted to your writing. It's like yours are crack and I'm Whitney. How sad is that? LOL. Anyways, you better update and even tho I don't think we're allowed to say this, you got my vote in every category I nominated you for, LOL. Yes, I am a nerd, but you gotta love me. =]

Author's Response: Timberballs. haha I love it. lol I just went and re-read his rambling and if I could change a part of it without the spacing going to hell, I might have changed the last bit to: "God, I love you. Not God. I-I mean, I love God. But I meant you. You, you, not God you." and then have his eyes do that twitchy thing people do when they realize what they said didn't make any sense and then have the rest be the same. haha Anyways, I love your dedication. :D 2 or 3 days? I would have gone into withdrawal after the first 10 hrs. lol It was 18pgs? My short story for class was only 9 and that was double-spaced too. haha "I think I'm addicted to your writing. It's like yours are crack and I'm Whitney." Aww, thanks! :D That really means a lot. That's the type of stuff I hope will happen once I bust out into that 'real world' everybody keeps warning me about. haha I have to keep listening to all these Whitney songs for the next chapter and I keep thinking, 'Damn you, crack! Damn you!' lol... You read, you review, you nominate, you vote, you ocassionally even pimp me, how can I not love you? haha So thanks a million...for all that!

OH, OH, OH!!!!!!!!! I kinda like and don't like the last thing Fionna said.  Me likes, 'cuz I'm hoping something could happen.  Me hates, 'cuz that's just plain rude.  "How RUDE!", to quote "Full House".  Ya know, I'm all sad now, after reading the last half of this chap.  Now this'll be on my mind when I go to sleep.  Thanks.  Who cares if she has a boyfriend?!?!?! You got Richard, hooray, NOW it's time for you to get the lurve of your life! *scoffs* I'm workin with chimps, I swear.

Author's Response: The nice thing about that last thing is that it kinda gives him the chance to still hope. Whether that's false hope or not has yet to be determined. haha But for all the crushing she did, she did leave that one what if... moment. haha It probably was rude too. Some of the "mean" things she says are some of the bluntly honest things that I might only think to myself and would never say no matter how much I wanted to. So in some ways she's like the uncensored me. lol "I'm workin with chimps, I swear." lol haha Thanks for reading/reviewing!

*Tears* I can't remember crying this bad during a chapter. Man Fionna is mean. Seriously what is she afraid of? And if she wasn't looking for love (with Richard or Justin or anyone else) why did she bother to get into a relationship? I'm not exactly pissed at her anymore, I just feel sorry for her cause she'll soon realize that she does love Justin but by the time she admits it, it'll probably be too late. Then she can't blame anyone but herself for her misfortune because Justin gave her plenty of chances and he poured his heart out. Well, I guess I'll just have to wait for the sequal. But you better make her suffer girl, cause you made Justin suffer tremendously. If Fionna doesn't suffer, we're gonna have some issues.lol.

Author's Response: haha I would like to say that I wasn't trying to make anyone cry, but that would be a lie. Yeah, I was. haha So I'm glad at least one person felt it that way. I always read things that can make me cry or get close and I'm like 'how do they do that?' haha So I tried, though maybe I should've held off on posting to work on it a bit more. Too late now. lol "And if she wasn't looking for love (with Richard or Justin or anyone else) why did she bother to get into a relationship?" Good question. I keep talking about chapter 21 (which then puts pressure on me to make that really really good :/ haha), but that's the chapter that brings up everything Fionna normally would never want to talk about. I'm not sure if your question gets answered, but I'm hoping it does. haha There's no sequel. I've been down that road and realized that was a never again moment. The most Justin and Fionna will get is a one chapter short story after this. This story still has three chapters left so there's still time for Fionna to suffer. Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Loved this chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Maaaan is Fi stubborn or what? [And, yeah, I said Fi!] I absolutely LOVE this story, but it drives me absolutely nuts. All the back-and-forthness is probably why I love it so much. =D Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: hahaha In chapter 21, y'all will find out exactly why she doesn't like being called Fi and maybe, hopefully it will explain why she's so crazy at times. Aww, thanks! I think that's how I am with the show "Prison Break" I love it, but I spend most of my time yelling at the TV pissed off at all the things that keep going wrong. lol Thanks for reading/reviewing!