i loved everything and cant wait for more, so when you going to post girlie? im so into the story i cant get into reading anything else or anyone elses stories til i know what happens here. no please post asap. before i start dreaming it too
dani
Author's Response: haha I think this is one of the best compliments I've gotten. :D You don't even know how much it means to me that y'all are so into this. I'm definitely going to miss this story when it's done. Which it will be in one chapter. Anyways, you can stop dreaming haha, the new crazy long update is up! Thanks for reading/reviewing, Dani!
I CAN NOT BELIEVE YOU DID IT LIKE THAT!!! I AM SHOCKED AND PISSED AT FIONNA I THINK I WILL KICK HER ASS!!!! DAMN HER!!!! PLEASE TELL ME THAT JUSTIN IS GOING TO COME TO THE DOOR OR SOMETHING!!! JUST TELL ME THE GIRL IS GOING TO STOP RUNNING!!! YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE ASAP!! SORRY THAT I AM JUST NOW GETTING TO THE STORY...BUT I DIDN'T GET MY NORMAL UPDATE EMAIL...ANYWHO BACK TO KICKING HER ASS!!! WHICH I WOULD HAPPY DO!!! DAMNIT!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IS TO COME NEXT!!
TINA
Author's Response: haha I thought of all the chapters so far this would be the one that Fionna's ass would be safe from the kicking. haha Nope, he didn't come to door. But she wasn't running, 'cept to him. Well, I hope this next chapter you're happier with her. Thanks for reading/reviewing, Tina!
Reviewer: Amy A
AnonymousDate: 10/11/06 - 09:29AM
Title: Hopelessly Guilty
Aww, I love colorblind and this whole damn chapter finally that bitch has got some sense into her but what the hell was Justin doing? There is no way he has gotten over her already, she's just too cynical. Update soon xxx
Author's Response: I love that song too, it helped to inspire that last scene. haha Cynical is her middle name. Thanks for reading/reviewing, Amy!
I hate to say I told her so but come on... two months? Who does that? Who waits two months to tell someone you love them? She shouldn't be surprised that Justin didn't open the door for her. The ironic thing is that her ex-boyfriend, the one she left Justin for only to break up with thim (wow that's complicated) is the the one that helped her admit her love for him. Her and Richard are the weirdest couple EVER. Ok so maybe they're not as weird as Fionna and Justin but what was with that break up? I laughed my ass off cause that was freakin cheesy. I would love a break up like that. I mean it's rare that break ups don't end up in curse words, some broken objects and swollen lips (lol, maybe that's just my break ups). ANYWAY, I have a feeling Fionna just started her journey to SUFFER ACADEMY (I know it sounds stupid, don't hold it against me) and i can't wait to read the rest of it. And if Fionna and Justin have to end (which I hope to God doesn't happen) I hope you give them a moment of understanding like you gave Fionna and Richard. I loooooove those moments.
*sigh* I need to be concentrating on college chemistry but I can't when you've got my nerves all wound up. Hurry up woman, I'm dying here.lol.
Author's Response: "I hate to say I told her so..." Fionna would say, no, you don't. haha She wasn't planning on waiting two months, she was planning on not saying it at all. So two months is pretty good. haha Yeah, Richard's that self-sacrificing good guy, so once it got to the point where he couldn't ignore it anymore, he had to do what he did. Weird is good though, right? haha I loved their break-up, cause when do you ever hear of someone breaking up and singing and dancing to a Whitney Houston song? haha Only Richard and Fionna. Even Fionna acknowledged the weirdness of that though in that chapter. "it's rare that break ups don't end up in curse words, some broken objects and swollen lips (lol, maybe that's just my break ups)" LMAO! haha I think she's been attending that Suffer Academy for awhile. haha Sorry 'bout distracting you from your school work (lord knows I distract myself like crazy from my own), but you don't have to wait anymore cause the newness is up! Thanks for reading/reviewing! Hopefully you haven't already died on me. haha
Noooooooo!!!!!! That's abiut all I can remember to say, I'm hurting too Fionna. :o( Then again, girly girl brought this on herself. Tryna push the feelings of love away. AND THEN, having poor Richard have to bare the burden of watching her realize her l-o-v-e for Justin. 'Twas tres, tres, tres sad. Je me pleure aussi!!!!! *sighs* Poor Richard...I'm here for you boo! And the nerve of Justin to not answer the door. And he better not had (or something more grammactically correct) moved on. P.S. Looooooved the sing-a-long!
Author's Response: She did bring it on herself, which just makes it that much more worse for her 'cause she can't blame anyone but her. I'm glad at least one person feels for Richard! :) I hated doing that to him. haha "Je me pleure aussi!!!!!" The only foreign language I took was Spanish, so you're gonna have to tell me what that means en ingles, por favor. haha P.S. Thanks, me too. haha :) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
awww, I feel bad and want to cry for her but at the same time there is no one to blame but herself. He finally moved on like he daid he was going to. Great girl I am gonna be sweatin waiting for the rest
Author's Response: It's all her fault and it sucks. And I can't say much more about that without giving away something that's in the next chapter. So you'll just have read, read (and review :]) away. haha Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Whoa, whoa, whoa. Richard said that he doesn't wanna be the rebound guy and the jealous guy again. So, why did he aske her out THREE WEEKS after she and Justin "broke up"?!?!?!?! *scoffs* Estupido!!!!! And shouldn't he be off some place getting his dribble, swish on? *folds arms in a huff* Excusez while I go and read the rest.
Author's Response: haha Because she'd already turned him into that before they even got together. But he probably should've tried to hold off for longer than that though. "And shouldn't he be off some place getting his dribble, swish on?"haha I thought about that, but then ignored it. *shrugs* We'll just say this all happened during off-season. haha
Didn’t he know what a black woman standing out in the rain for you, hair completely unprotected from the elements means? Now that is love for damn sure, haha. Where the fuck is Justin? UGH!!!!!! SHE FINALLY DID IT! and he's in the house fuckin' some hoebag he met in the street. I don't have time for this! I'm gonna have a heart attack, I swear. Jesus pieces, I'm sick to my stomach. I was hoping for the kiss in the rain scene and the peel off these wet clothes before we make love scene! LOL. it's okay tho because you ARE gonna update REAL soon. . . like. . . NOW? lol
Author's Response: "Now that is love for damn sure, haha." Isn't it though haha. I came up with that watching an old episode of Grey's where Meredith was waiting out in the rain for Derek and I was thinking, how much would a black woman have to love a man to do that without an umbrella? haha I know it would hurt me to do that. lol So I decided it would have to be a helluva lot. lol Kiss in the rain scene? haha That would require me to be a nice person and give y'all exactly what you. haha Okay, so I didn't update soon, soon, but...what, 12 days? That's still damn good for me. haha As always, thanks for reading/reviewing, Mari!
Love the chapter, that better be his mother or im gonna be mad. Now he has good reason for it to be another chick because she's turned him down more times than i can count ,but still. You had me damn near in tears for fi fi. I love this story update when you can.Night.
Author's Response: Aww, I wasn't even going for tears this time. haha But it was pretty sad. Well, I've updated...so you can see how it all works out, or doesn't. Thanks for reading/reviewing!