Great chapter!!! Poor Fionna!!Now I understand why she is the way she is...Awe I am so sorry for her! The bitch!! I wish her other family would have slapped the shitout of there mother or left her hanging or something...I don't understand why they didn't stand behind her. And try to stop her from leaving again! And omg Justin!! He drove the car off the road then it cought on fire and he was laughing while watching it burn and The Paprazzi didn't see this...Boy was he lucky!! lol...Boy is he taking Fionna's rejection really hard this time around..ok know I must read the next chapter to see what more darma is lying in wait for me to read! lol
Tina
Author's Response: Y'all know that was just one chapter that wouldn't post all in one right? haha I should've put 'continued' vs. 'take two'. Anyways... Yeah, it would've been nice if the guys stood up for her. Paula may be the tiniest thing in house, but she's the biggest, strongest personality. She's definitely the HBIC (and unlike New York on Flavor of Love 2 she doesn't have to go around saying it, but everybody knows and acts accordingly). So yeah, when she starts screaming the menfolk just kinda freeze up. But in other things, against other people, they wouldn't hesitate to defend her. But then that's another kind of fighting entirely. They weren't there for the second time, so they couldn't stop her. She's not gone for good, at least not from their lives...Paula's is another story though. Yeah, he did that. It was stupid, but he wasn't just trippin off of Fionna, he says something along those lines in the chapter. There was a bunch of other things and I was going to add more stuff with Trace and Lynn, but didn't cause I was tired of thinking about this chapter. haha But it was one of those when it rains, it pours times. He laughed because he was still in shock and he was drunk. haha It's not for sure that some of the paparazzi didn't see though. *shrugs* Thanks for reading/reviewing!
WA-OOOOW!!!!! Her m...Paula is a real bitch. She's such a bitch that when they tried to put her pic next to the word, the word got all Whitney Houston and was like, "HELL TO THE NAW!!!!!!", up and left. Isn't being sickly supposed to make people all remorseful and wanting to right their wrongs? That's okay, Fionna doesn't need you anyway! *gives that heffa-ho Paula the bird* Ya know, if I was Fionna, I woulda told her that I hoped she died and burned in Hell...but that's just me.
Another brilliantly excellently crazy awesome chap. Long as hell 'tho, I began reading it this morning, but had to leave out for class...and I wasn't even a fourth of the way done! *lol* In the words of Timberlake, "Jesus Pieces!". *lol* I'm suprised I finished it before the next century. :o)
Author's Response: Lmao! Paula is pretty bitchy, but she does have a softer side but she can't (maybe closer to won't) show that to Fionna because she resents her too much. haha Fionna couldn't ever talk like that to her, that's like trying to say that to your mother. And even if technically Paula isn't her mom, she still couldn't go there with her. Why, thank ya! Glad you enjoyed it despite all the typos (I re-reading after posting and started cringing so much that I was going to delete it and re-post it later haha). And yeah, it was ridick long, that's why it didn't fit in one and wound up posting like it was like it was two. haha I love the Jesus Pieces thing. haha I'm gonna start saying it myself one of these days. Don't worry though the next chapter should be waaay shorter. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Author's Response: Lawd, even talking about my typos I get typos...
I think this chapter was the most depressing of all. I love Fionna's brother's, they are something else. But her mom's a bitch. I don't like her at all. Fionna left cause of her and she's still treating her like shit. What a retard. I really hope they work things out though... I don't like all this crying I've been doing.lol.
Author's Response: It was pretty depressing, but I had to do it so it could be Fionna's redemption chapter...so you can get why she does the things she does. I love 'em too. They're like the brothers I wish I had, haha, not that I don't like my own brothers though. But two younger brothers, just aren't the same as having two older brothers. lol Yeah, Paula resents Fionna and what she represents and at first I just going to have that be it. But I don't think it is anymore. I think (mostly because of what I had Charlie say in the beginning) that once Fionna was gone she missed her, but once she comes back...*shrugs* It's a hate to love her, love to hate her thing, only so much worse because all Fionna wants is for her to love her.
Oh my. Fi's mom's a bitch. Well, not mom, lady. . . idk. . this whole thing made me sad. all of it. how could someone be so cruel and uncaring? how could someone want something as simple as love and affection from the only mother she's ever known and not get it? why was there love from everyone else and not her? i now understand. i feel bad about all those remarks i made about her being stupid for not loving justin right back the way he deserves. how could she when someone who was suppose to love her unconditionally can't love her at all? =[
Author's Response: haha Yeah, I figured some of y'all would feel bad. Everytime y'all said something like that, I was thinking, if you only knew! haha Fionna definitely hasn't had it easy, but she definitely wouldn't want pity either. She's a tough cookie. Justin just had the right stuff to finally get her to crumble. haha Or least let her know it was okay to crumble sometimes. Anyways, thanks for reading/reviewing!
awesome!!!! please you can't leave me hanging like that. update soon please
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't know how soon I'll be updating, cause not that long after I posted chapter 21 I opened the document again to look at the last chapter...and all I did was stare at it for a few minutes and then closed it. haha But I'll definitely try not to have it take a long time. It won't be anywhere near as long as chapter 21 was. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
