Reviewer: WhitneyJTSignedDate: 12/28/06 - 11:23AM
Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)
Yeah I DEFINITELY LOVED this story!! I thought it was great! I've read quite a few on here..but never reviewed till now. I really really liked this story! Talk to ya later! Hope ya write more :)
Author's Response: Thank ya, thank ya! haha I'm happy you decided to review mine, cause I love to hear what people think. I'm (still) working on a new story and hopefully I'll have that posted sooner rather than later.
Reviewer: classicbeautySignedDate: 11/28/06 - 02:41PM
Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)
girl i loved every minute of it, from beginning to the end. im sad its over and i wish their was more.
but i must say you worked it, i felt chapter the way you work the song. whole time just wondering how you do it. all i could do was look back in remember from the chapters before and that so was so prefect for them. it was writen for them and christina dont even know it girl. lol
but as crazy as it sounds, after i read your stuff you make me want to pick up a pen and paper, just to see if i can even try to come up with something close to be as good as you. so thats what i did. you really do inspire me and i cant wait for the new story, as a matter of a fact it be a great christmas present.
so now remember that all i want for christmas is a new story from you.
later dayz, dani
p.s. just to let you know since you took so long before, i just started reading the story over trying to hold me down. especially the little less me and you and the chapter after that. i felt it. like it was in movie and i was the fionna girl. loved it.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed it this much. Even though I have started writing something that goes with this, I'm not sure I'm going to finish it since it very possibly could ruin the Jufi magic that I left off with at the end of this story. That song was perfect for them. haha As soon as I heard it, I switched it to that song instead, because I had a little list going with Rascal Flatts "Bless The Broken Road" and Vanessa Carlton's "Who's To Say," which I'd picked out for the chapter long before most of the other chapters were written. But anyways, that doesn't sound crazy at all, sounds great. haha Because to me a really good story isn't necessarily the one that I can't step away from, but the one that inspires me, has my mind wandering over possibilities (usually stuff that has nothing to do with the story I just read haha). So that's cool that you could feel that way about something that I've written. As far as your Christmas present of a new story, haha, that's some pressure. Well, my break starts on the 16th (if I survive finals week), so maybe I'll get struck by some inspiration and start some serious work on "Tangled" and get that up before Christmas, or at least before the end of the year. haha As always, thanks for reading/reviewing! :D
Reviewer: Lizzy3218SignedDate: 11/22/06 - 01:06AM
Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)
OMG I loooooooooooooooooved it!!! I about died of laughter during the proposal scene... too funny. I just knew Fionna would do something like that. Her and Justin are outrageous. I love them. Great story, great ending... I have so much I wann say about this story but I'm sure you don't wanna read a 5 page review so I'll keep the raving to myself. You are freakin awesome. i can't wait to read your next work :-).
P.S. happy turkey day.
Author's Response: I wrote that proposal scene waaay before this chapter even came up and as I was working it into the chapter, I thought, 'Would Fionna really do this? This seems more like Janice.' So I'm glad you thought it sounded like something Fionna would do. Oh and if you ever feel the need to write a 5pg review, you go right on ahead and I'd squeal at the sight of it (haha cause I'm a dork) and read it with a smile. Thanks so much for reading/reviewing this story! And I hope you had a good Thanksgiving, too. :)
Reviewer: CandydivaSignedDate: 11/21/06 - 07:25PM
Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)
Don't tell anyone, but it took me a good 5mins to remember that I had to sign in to review. *lol*
I HEARTED this story sooo much, and Imma miss JuFi dearly. It was an excellent ending to an excellent story. But, enough of that, let's get on to my usual silly madness. :o)
Wait, wait, wait. Ya mean to tell me that Fionna did all that agreeing with Justin's plan, and NEVER let Richard slide inside her noochie?!?!?!?! Are you serious?!?! G! What is up with that? You did all of that work to get the man, and didn't do the freaky-sneaky with him? Fi-on-na, I am ashamed. *shakes head* Tsk, tsk. Speaking of makin' whoopie, I can't beleive Justin experiend "performance anxiety". *lol* You'd think he would've been all over her...I mean, it had been months since his last skin-slapping, sweaty, between the sheets encounter.
Ooh! And I loooooooved the proposal flashback. Too cute! *girly squeal* He threw her a prom! Oh, and I would've done the overly melodramatic rambling just like Fionna. *lol*
Now, on to the wedding. I CANNOT BUH-LEEV Paula tubby, bitchy, heffa-ho of an ass still managed to golden rain on Fionna's most "bestiest" day!!!! *scoffs* You should've killed her off back in chapter 22. I'm just glad that her brothers were there for her...at least she can count on the three important men in her life not to be intimidated by Bitchy McFatass.
Since I'm sure this is getting waaaay too long, I shall wrap it up. I will patiently sit at my desk, awaiting your next story...or a new chap in one of the others.
Author's Response: LOL, your secret is safe with me...and whoever else read this review. haha Aww, it's a long one...I love it. :D "Ya mean to tell me that Fionna did all that agreeing with Justin's plan, and NEVER let Richard slide inside her noochie?!?!?!?!" haha Nope, she never did. A few close calls, but she just never let him get that close. And the funny/bad thing is that despite having told myself 'no more sequels,' I'm already mulling over the possibilities of the consequences for her having not gone there with him earlier. I've actually already started working on a chapter. But I think it's not going to be a long story...no, no, I know it's not, because I'm not going to let it be. "Speaking of makin' whoopie, I can't believe Justin experienced "performance anxiety." *lol*" haha Yeah, that was another one of those scenes that I wrote before the whole story was formed in my head and I just loved it so I couldn't change it. But the thing is, I'm not sure if it had been months, I mean after she got with Richard he was in no way celibate and then I never really said if they slept together pre- or post-engagement. *shrugs* Plus, Justin's all smooth and debanior until he actually falls for the woman...then he's goofy and awkward at times. lol "I CANNOT BUH-LEEV Paula tubby, bitchy, heffa-ho of an ass still managed to golden rain on Fionna's most "bestiest" day!!!!" Yep, she had to do it though, that's just her way. Even though I think a part of her secretly wanted to be there. I might work on their relationship more in a short story...though technically, this was supposed to be it. I will not write a sequel...riiight haha yeah, I'll just keep telling myself that and maybe it'll come true. But I just keep thinking about it, which is so bad for the whole not doing it thing. lol Anyways, thanks for reading, thanks for leaving me all these hilarious reviews, they all made me smile. :]
Reviewer: Vegas ChickSignedDate: 11/21/06 - 10:12AM
Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)
GIRL THIS WAS AWESOME!!! AND FUNNY AS HELL!! I LOVED IT!!! AWE THE LAST CHAPÜTER I THINK I AM GOING TO CRY!!! IT BEEN SO MUCH FUN READING THIS STORY AS YOU WROTE IT!! IT HAS BEEN A GREAT STORY AND REALLY SAD KNOW TO SEE IT END!!! BUTSO LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT NEW STORY!!!!!
TINA
Author's Response: "AW THE LAST CHAPTER I THINK I AM GOING TO CRY!!!" haha It was sad though, wasn't it? A happy sad--even I didn't want it to end. lol Which is probably why I'm already working on another chapter with these characters...I love 'em too much to let go. Anyways, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, maybe the next thing I post will be a short story for these characters or a new story called "Tangled"...we shall see. :) Thanks so much for reading/reviewing, Tina!
Reviewer: TimberlakeSignedDate: 11/20/06 - 12:11PM
Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. omfg. it's over. it's all over =[ it's so unfair, but it's sooooo good =[ i know, i know. it's fiction. it has to end sometimes, but it's when you find a good story like this that you wish it could stay forever. i've waited so long for this update, but now i wish it never came, haha. this story was- no - IS amazing. i can't believe i started reading so late. i'm glad i found it. i'm glad i got to follow along the crazy life of fi-fucking-on-na. uh, i could continue to blabble about my favorite moments (the ricci and fi confrontation. justin giving fionna the necklace. the 'sex scene, which was effin' hilarious) but i won't 'cause i could just basically retell the whole story since i loved every moment. every line. every joke and serious moment. every revelation and hesitation. every fight and kiss 'n make up. i loved it all. thank you so much for writing this brilliant story. thank you for the shout out, haha. and PLEASE write another story =] LMAO. okay. . . i guess i have to end this now. . . i was never really good with good-byes =[
Author's Response: "i've waited so long for this update, but now i wish it never came, haha." haha My thoughts exactly. I'd tried to finish the story before the end of the summer and obviously that didn't happen. Then when I got to last chapter or two, it hit me that it's almost over and I was like 'nooo.' haha Yeah, so I was on this whole 'never can say goodbye' tip when I posted the chapter and now as I'm replying to the reviews the song that's in my head is 'We've Only Just Begun' hahaha which is just screwing with my 'no more sequels' promise to myself. Anyways, I love that you loved it this much. I even loved the way you worded your review. haha And before I start a sort of review of your review, lol, I'm just gonna say thanks so very much for giving this story a chance. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: MooseSignedDate: 11/20/06 - 05:30AM
Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)
Oooh....I loved it. I feel all gushy inside.
although, that feeling could be because it's 530 in the morning...but it was still great :)
Author's Response: haha 5:30 is pretty early (or late if you've just been awake the whole time). Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: GigiSignedDate: 11/20/06 - 03:06AM
Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)
What can I really say that chapter was sweet, adorable, cute, and crazy! I'm gonna miss them!
Author's Response: Not that long after I posted this if I had of replied like a good lil' author haha, I would've said, I'm gonna miss them too. But now...it seems like there's a good chance that you won't have to miss them for very long. :) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: cae329SignedDate: 11/19/06 - 11:00PM
Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)
i loved this story from the start, and it was absolutely amazing, great job!
Author's Response: Why thank ya! :D
Reviewer: LoveYou2SignedDate: 11/19/06 - 10:47PM
Title: On Our Way (Epilogue)
*sobs* They got married! That's just great, girl! LOL @ Fionna's ramblings. They're meant to be! *sniff* I'm gonna miss this story! Fi and JT foeva! Great story, great ending! :D
Author's Response: Yep they got married. haha Though I had planned that all along, when it finally got there, I started to hesitate on it, haha but I went with it anyways. Would've caused me to have to think so more if I changed it...wouldn't want that. lol I'm not sure anymore if you're going to have to miss them any longer than you would have if you were waiting for the story to be updated. *shrugs* I'm already working on a new chapter, we'll see how that goes though. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
