Reviewer: kahlymillaSignedDate: 08/27/06 - 02:03PM
Title: At First Sight
So I came across this when I was searching for something good to read. But, I have 17 chapters to read, Goody. Lol, I'm kidding. The amount of chapters doesn't bother me as long as the story is good. And yours is. I see why you have so many reviews. The plot is on point as well as the characters. I especially like Fiona's character. She is nonchalant-sarcastic. Loves it! That's a mirror of me right there (well, actually my twin is a mirror of me, but you know what I mean, lmao) Anyway, I just love her background, all the stuff that happened to her is presented in a funny way because of her attitude but's it's really not funny at all. I feel for her actually. But, on the other hand I glad she didn't let it get the best of her. As far Justin, I can already tell he's gonna be a jerk. "Her nervousness was kind of cute, in a girl giraffe kind of way." Giraffe kind of way? That's was so uneccessary, lol. But that's him. I'm anxious to read the next few chapters. I'll leave a review every few chapters so you can know what I think periodically, cool?
Author's Response: Aww, I love getting new readers/reviewers! Yeah, me too...I love sarcastic main characters, maybe cause that's how I am. Makes it easier to relate/write. haha Yeah, in the beginning he was a jerk. But still a likeable one, I think. haha Thanks for reading/reviewing and giving this story a shot! :D
Reviewer: amk16SignedDate: 07/28/06 - 02:38AM
Title: At First Sight
He really should quit his dayjob and become an art critic. he's just so articulate...and shit.
Seriously tho, i love how u turned around the words "at first sight". interesting twist. I'm loving it.
Author's Response: haha Thanks! :) He does have a way with words...and shit, lol, doesn't he?
Reviewer: TimberlakeSignedDate: 06/13/06 - 08:23PM
Title: At First Sight
That was even better than the first chapter. Damn, why haven't I read your stuff before? I'm so ashamed =[ I was missing out on excellent work. I love this story! lol
Author's Response: "Damn, why haven\'t I read your stuff before?" I used to ask myself that all the time. lol jk Catching on late is almost better than being the first to know, because there\'s no waiting...it\'s all just there for you, whenever you want. Anyways, I\'m glad you noticed it and decided to take the time to read and review...every chapter. haha, I was shocked as hell when I came and saw that I had ten new reviews, especially since it had been a while since the last time I updated. Anyways, I hope you notice that I did read and respond to your reviews (maybe not to all of them, but I did just get off of work so my mind is on a nap right now lol). Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I most definitely appreciate it! :)
Reviewer: LaurencozSignedDate: 07/29/05 - 02:12PM
Title: At First Sight
he called her giraffe girl...hmmm...I think he likes her! Lol. I luv ur style of writing -hilarious:)
Author's Response: Aww, thanks soo much. That means a lot. *smiles big cheesy grin* Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Nique
AnonymousDate: 07/25/05 - 12:23PM
Title: At First Sight
Leave it to Justin to be a block-head that wants A LOT of attention. What, is she not good enough to watch his dog, just because she doesn't know his favorite color? I love, love, loooove Fiona!!!! Gotta have someone cut buddy boy down to size. Oh, and as much as he travels and tours, Imma need for him to know more than "where is the bathroom". I took Spanish for only 2yrs (and that was literally a decade ago), and I knew what Fionna said. *shakes head* Ha! But, I still love it.
Author's Response: lol I'm glad you like her so much. lol Yeah, I meant to make the spanish a little more complicated than that but I couldn't think of anything. lol So um, yeah that wound up making him stupider than he already did. Ah well. Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: glitter15SignedDate: 07/24/05 - 09:50PM
Title: At First Sight
HAHAH, well I basically made all my comments to you as I edited this chapter, but once again, I'll go ahead and review cus I'm just the shit like that. Anyways, this chapter was absolutely hilarious. I don't know why you didn't wanna post it...crazy slut. The whole part about Justin calling her a giraffe? (Shamless laugh) I mean so fucking great, yet so fucking rude at the same time. I couldn't help but snort though. And you gotta love Justin and his profound ass: "Nice colors and shit." Wow, you go boy! That was a nice analysis right thurr, baby boy. ROFL. Anyways...Justin is special, but I still love him. Fi is the shit (ha, I called her Fi and she would hate that, but OH WELL) and I can't wait to see how this all plays out. I know what's gonna happen, but at the same time, I still wanna read it and find out. Ain't it grand? LOL. You best be sending me these cahpters in advance though, cus I'm just special like that, got it? I want an update on this a.s.a.p, btw. Oh and don't think that god damned bet has expired. I will consider that you can update either and/or BOM or EIB as I update JOY but that's as nice as it's gonna get heffa. Whee...you gotta update soon though, cus you were just BORRRRRRN to make me hapy, and i'm so LUCCCCCKY like that......cus im a star. ROFL. ok ok so i couldn't figure a way to use those ones either. sue me, bitch. rofl loves ya!!
Author's Response: Well maybe I didn't want to post it cause I'm a crazy slut. lol Justin's a really sensitive and intellectual guy, I'm glad you noticed that about him cause I wasn't trying to overwhelm y'all with the magnitude of his full deepness just yet. lol In one sentence you reminded me of two songs. First one being obvious...Chingy's 'right thurr' and the Tyese's 'just a baby boy.' Yes, you'll be getting them in advance because you are 'special.' lol And whhhhhhyy can't it expire?!? lol Alright, I'll try to update...if I must. *sighs* Thanks for the lovely review, even though you're so demanding I guess I still like your slutty bitch self. :)
Reviewer: Nikki G.
AnonymousDate: 07/24/05 - 07:24AM
Title: At First Sight
Cute. Update soon and thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update 'soon.' lol Thanks again for the review!
Reviewer: Teeny
AnonymousDate: 07/24/05 - 03:13AM
Title: At First Sight
His indepth analytic approach to art is really special...."nice colors and shit" (actually I say the same thing, but let's just keep schtum). And calling a girl a giraffe is NOT the way to charm her, but then again Fionna seriously doesn't sound like a girl who wants to be charmed which is awesome because we all get a good laugh at Justin's expense when he tries to pull moves on her. "What's my favorite color?" honestly Justin, who cares?! Anyway, as you can tell I'm already heavily involved in this story, Fionna seems like my twin and I can't wait to see where this goes! Oh, and before this drives me crazy, did she say the pleasure is mine "Senor Justin"? That'll annoy me ALL day!
Author's Response: lol Yeah, I was trying to make him seem real deep and intellectual, does it show? lol Well he's not trying to charm her yet, though when he does she's not going to make it easy for him. She said the pleasure is mine 'Senor Timberlake' but yeah, basically what you said. lol But anyways thanks for liking it so far and thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Oh and Senor though without the tilde (however it's spelled) over the n, but it's supposed to be Senor Timberlake...as in Mr. Timberlake.
Reviewer: Gigi
AnonymousDate: 07/24/05 - 01:15AM
Title: At First Sight
Oh yeah her name's Fionna!?!
Author's Response: Uh-huh. Don't like that name either? lol
Reviewer: Gigi
AnonymousDate: 07/24/05 - 01:14AM
Title: At First Sight
Great chapter I don't what to comment on first. Yeah that giraffe comment was a little harsh. And his dog's name is Sadie?huh. Also how used 'Love is Battlefield' I love that song. I know there something I'm probably missing so I'm gonna go re-read it right now. lol.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yep the dog's name is Sadie. Why, bad name? lol Yeah, I like that song too and I'd just recently got to hear it after being forced to watch '13 Going On 30' lol so I decided to throw it in there. Thanks for the review!
