Reviews For Best Of Me
Reviewer: Moose Signed Date: 07/08/06 - 11:47PM Title: Sugar Pie, Honey Bunch

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story :) you're doing a wonderous job, and even though the plot isn't new, I think you've re-newed it well :)

Author's Response: Well, I\'m thoroughly happy that you\'re enjoying it. lol :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: Timberlake Signed Date: 06/13/06 - 10:18PM Title: Sugar Pie, Honey Bunch

Aw, Honey Bunch and Sugar Pie, LMAO! Cute!!!! LOL! Another wonderful chapter, my dear. I must continue tomorrow, it's getting late over here, lol. I love it! LOL


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 08/18/05 - 10:04AM Title: Sugar Pie, Honey Bunch

OH! It makes since now...just like you promised. Yay! *claps* So Justin does like Janice. If it was as obvious to us, by his mannerisms, why isn't it obvious to Janice? Sheesh, man I tell ya.

Author's Response: lol Um, well, maybe it's because of the way Justin is goin' about it. Doin' it in the 3rd grade style of not being nice to one you like and claimin' you don't like them. lol I mean, he's not pullin' hair or anything, but he's kinda been avoiding her, which then leads her to think he doesn't like her. And besides he's Justin Timberlake, hottie celeb,...she's not conceited enough to think 'oh well he must be doing these things cause secretly he really likes me' lol Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: Teeny Anonymous Date: 08/07/05 - 03:43AM Title: Sugar Pie, Honey Bunch

Britney the hoebag, at it again....lets just hope she got infected with genital warts or something. Sorry, that was quite a disturbing mental picture. ANYWAY, I can't stop looking at pictures of Justin now and examining the size of his ears! lol He needs to stop calling Fionna Giraffe Girl; just because ONE GIRL doesn't fall over herself trying to get to him is not an excuse for him to start calling names it's ridiculous and immature and...(FYI Fionna, just call him Dumbo). Everyone says Fionna has a bad attitude but I found we're just very similar...LMAO Great update, this story gets better each chapter!

Author's Response: lol I don't know if I would even consider his ears to be big, I don't usually pay them all that much attention when I look at him. Especially when he's shirtless...my eyes just kinda get zoned in to one spot then. haha True, but Justin is kinda ridiculous and immature too. lol Yeah, I like Fionna's attitude but I was beginning to wonder if I had taken it too far or something for awhile. And aww, I'm glad you're relating to Fionna like that. I know when I'm able to do that with a character it makes reading the story so much enjoyable. 'Great update, this story gets better each chapter!' ...*big goofy grin* Thanks, I was thinking the chapters were just getting longer and looonger with each new one. haha Guess now I got some pressure to live up to that. lol Thank ya so much for the review!


Reviewer: glitter15 Signed Date: 08/07/05 - 01:36AM Title: Sugar Pie, Honey Bunch

Well, I must say that this story is the s-h-i-t. Only four chapters in, and already...there's no escape, I can't wait, I need a hit, so baby, give me it. You're dangerous, and I'm loving it....cus oh yeah...you're TOXIC. Whee, *giggles*. I know, I know--you loved that. You don't have to tell me twice, woman. LOL. Kay moving on....the story is lovely. And I think Fi is the mother fuckin' shit, homie. She's so funny and I just love her witty, smart ass. Poor girl has been in shambles for far too long, and I know she's not gonna give in easily to Mr. JT, but soon enough she'll find that her life is just...OH so much better with his sexy ass in it. Ha! Meanwhile, I'm glad they are becoming friends. I can't wait till the whole plot starts to play in, where the deals to help each other out and everything start makin' me wanna sing like Mariah, 'wait a minute this is TOO deep.' Hahha...okay I'm not making sense here, am I? Ya know, it's late though, and it's a freakin' review from me, so whatever I write is gonna be good no matta what. ;) Cough cough. Oh gawd, and btw, I'm STILL rollin' over this line even now: What does a giraffe-girl know about ear sizes anyways?! Hahah daaaaaaayumm, just 'cause you mad that you're lookin' like Dumbo and shit, doesn't mean ya gotta bust out with all that, Justin. LOL. Hahah, but I'm glad he did 'cause it sho as fuck made my ass laugh. OH OH OH and this right thurr was just...the shit: "She blinked for several seconds without responding. "I'm a rabbit." She said, nibbling on her wrap again." LMAO, yay, so between Fi and Justin here, we got ourselves a elephant, and a part girraffe/rabbit. Oh hell, now if that's not proof that they BELONG together, than I don't know what is? LOL. I can just see it now....them makin' those babie gorillas and shit, and havin' a whole farm of Timba Timba Lakes....ROFL. Oh god, *bangs head against a wall and forces herself away from the computer* Okay as you can tell, I'm havin WAY too much fun being an idiot at 2 am in the morning and I best just shut up before people really think I'm on crack. LOL. Lovessssss it. Update soon, heffa---cus you know damn well I'mma beat you down if you don't. ;)

Author's Response: lol Ay dios mio, I just changed the ring tone for Justin's cell in this chapter to "Toxic" because of that...lol Pity is toxic and I don't mean that in no nice way. haha The deal thing...yes, well I'm debating how soon I'm going to throw that in, but it's coming up real soon though. Okay let me see if I got this right...elephant + giraffe/rabbit = gorillas? lol Yeah, it's just like National Geographic up in this bitch. hahaha Ahh that reminds me of a song, well actually two. "Bad Touch" Bloodhood Gang (You and me baby ain't nothin but mammals/So let's do it like they do on the Discovery Channel) and "Closer" Nine Inch Nails (I want to fuck you like an animal/I want to feel you from the inside) haha But ANYways.... you're even violent towards yourself I see. You really shouldn't be banging your head like that, girl. I mean you already got a limited supply of brain cells to work with as it is. haha I kid, I kid. *smiles innocently* And yeah, yeah...I'll update as soon as you do. I know I still technically owe you another chapter, but don't you think this one chapter was long enough to equal the two I owed? haha Well if it's worth anything, for the record, I have begun the often headache inducing process of writing the next chapter. But I seem to have this thing where when I should be working on the very next chapter I find myself working on the ones that come after that instead. lol Oh well. Thanks so much for the looooong review, you know I loved it. *puts on the deep DMX voice* Cuz yo, that was mad crazy, son. And had me with all the hahas and hehes and shit. You're XXL fresh to def. Nahskeenameanie? Word. lmao


Reviewer: deebee Anonymous Date: 08/06/05 - 04:04PM Title: Sugar Pie, Honey Bunch

I was so glad to see that you had updated. This story is so funny. And this had to be my favorite line, "If he knew what was good for him he would exercise his right to remain silent, before I exercise mine to stick my foot up his scrawny pop locking ass." That was so good. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: *does cabbage patch while singing "I got a new reader/reviewer, I got a new reader/reviewer.' before going into the dance breakdown bit* haha Yes, I know, I'm weird. Well I'm glad that you're glad that I updated. lol Yeah, I've been trying to keep it on the funny side, so that's good that you think it is. Thanks for the review and hopefully I'll hear more from you come next update! :)


Reviewer: Memyself Anonymous Date: 08/05/05 - 11:37PM Title: Sugar Pie, Honey Bunch

Am I first again?! Woo! Eww on Britney *kicks her* And so he's NERVOUS cause he's gotta lil' crush on Janice, eh? So that's what that's about. hmm. Well Fionna needs to lighten up so her and Justin can get it on ok? More soon!

Author's Response: lol Yep, first again. You're like Speedy Gonzalez or something on the reviews, nobody can beat you. haha. Yes, Britney is eww...in general. lol jp What can I say, there's just something about Janice that gets Justin all into a fluster. No girl has ever made him feel that way, so it's really gonna suck for him when he finds out she's actually a he. lol jk jk haha I think at this point at least the thought of her getting it on with him much too repulsive for her even to begin to fathom let alone follow through. lol Will that change? Only future chapters will tell. :P Thanks for the review, I really appreciate and I'll try to update soon. Try being the key word though. :D





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