Reviewer: Gigi
AnonymousDate: 07/22/05 - 05:25PM
Title: A New Friend
Yeah I can't wait to read more either. But did Justin do something to there father?
Reviewer: FelixSignedDate: 07/22/05 - 11:26AM
Title: A New Friend
Once again, I'm pleased! I love how you ended the chapter with "in the attic", very forboding! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
In this chapter I didn't see any problems with your tenses, so I suppose I don't have much to say constructive criticism wise...
Dude I'm so excited to read more of this story!!