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Reviewer: megan
Anonymous
Date: 11/23/05 - 03:45PM
Title: My First Night
I can't wait for more visuals between J&K
Reviewer: chapstickonly
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/05 - 06:10AM
Title: My First Night
nicely written. it had a good balance between being hot and heavy and romantic. "He could still feel her skin, he could still hear her, he could remember every moment. Holding onto that, instead of her, was enough for him right now." I really loved this ending, and im hoping that this will not be the last of mckaylas and justins encounters.
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/05 - 12:19AM
Title: My First Night
It was so hot and at th same time full of emotions. I loved it.
Reviewer: amk16
Signed
Date: 07/21/05 - 11:59PM
Title: My First Night
I absolutely love this story. I've read the entire fic on a yahoo group and I absolutely love it. Great work.
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 07/21/05 - 10:03PM
Title: My First Night
Loved it. Very sensual as well as beautiful. Wriet more. Thanks. J&B!
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