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Reviewer: classicbeauty
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Date: 09/28/06 - 10:53AM
Title: Brown Eyed Girl
i loved it, it put a smile on my face, it was so believable, i cant get enough of i... HOLD UP?! OVer? whatca mean complete? no more k and j? what are we going to do? what am i going to do? well i dont know what to tell ya...but um yeah *sniffles but trys to cover it up with a cough* i know you must have like a whole neither seires of some awesome new characters that growing in that brillant mind of yours that you must be keepin from us...yes? no? maybe so? cause ya know this just aint going to work... i know shut up dani! lata - dani *sniffle* p.s. dont let the tears fool ya, cause i loved the whole chapter and she remind me of my neice. ;-D
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 09/27/06 - 12:55AM
Title: Brown Eyed Girl
Oh, and I thought the Reichen part was kinda cute/funny...cause that's something I could completely see my lil' cousin doing. Only she might have given him some attitude if she really didn't want to hand it over...haha And dammit, I just noticed...this was the end. :(
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 09/27/06 - 12:48AM
Title: Brown Eyed Girl
Aww, that was so extra cute. I don't think I've read chapter 2 or 3 haha, so I'll have to go back and read those. But Jolie is so adorable with her own 'A da a da a da' language. She kinda reminds me of my lil' cousin, who's 3 going on 4...she might not think she's a princess, but she definitely tries to run things. haha It was just so cute. The whole party. The off-key singing, the Princess coming to visit, Lance accepting his boa haha...to JC's 1-888 number. Very funny, very real. Great chapter! :D I loved it! Update soon!
Reviewer: Sassy Spacey
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Date: 09/26/06 - 04:12PM
Title: Brown Eyed Girl
I have never once read this actual story, but I love this series. I'm mre of a shory story girl sometimes. In this one, Justin and Jolie are SO cute. ;) You did a great job, with putting enough info in the short stories to give enough background info to understand it. Awesome job! -Traci
Reviewer: vessy
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Date: 09/26/06 - 04:10PM
Title: Brown Eyed Girl
beatiful, i hope there will be more
Reviewer: Vegas Chick
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Date: 09/26/06 - 04:05PM
Title: Brown Eyed Girl
I LOVED IT!!! IT WAS SO SWEET!!! ITS SAD THAT ITS THE END!!! I LOVE THIS SERIES SO MUCH!!! *SIGH* TINA
Reviewer: Gigi
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Date: 09/25/06 - 11:10PM
Title: Brown Eyed Girl
That was wrong what he said to Lance even if it was a joke, also Jolie seems like she doesn't like Reichen.
Author's Response: I agree it was wrong what he said, but I put that in because I like to pretend the characters are human, and sometimes humans don't do the best thing... Also, I think Jolie was more concerned with making sure Uncle Lance got his bag, more so than if Reichen was cool or not. But to each, his own interpretation. :)
Reviewer: Mz New Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/06 - 10:46PM
Title: Brown Eyed Girl
lOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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