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Reviewer: FantaCwriter
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Date: 04/03/06 - 12:54AM
Title: Coming to Terms
Awesome chapter! I know it's been a while since you've worked on this, but if the inspiration ever comes back, I hope you put it on paper and continue.
Author's Response: I\'m hoping that the inpsiration will strike soon!
Reviewer: FantaCwriter
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Date: 04/03/06 - 12:50AM
Title: Truth Revealed
First off, the octopus got me! Eww. ;) Second, great chapter. The emotion, the confusion, the tension of the cliffhanger of "we have to talk". I'm off to read the next chapter. Author's Response: Yay! I did a cliffhanger that worked! Seriously, thank you!
Reviewer: FantaCwriter
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Date: 04/03/06 - 12:45AM
Title: Chapter Two - Journals
"I can even burn salad." We've laughed about that before and it still amuses me. I'm really liking the way the relationship between the two is developing. It's as if it's been there the whole time, but the slow and comfortable friendship is gradually taking on a new twist. Author's Response: We \"know\" how well he does in the kitchen. *laughs*
I like slow and comfortable.
Reviewer: FantaCwriter
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Date: 04/03/06 - 12:41AM
Title: Chapter One
Definite thumbs up on the description. Cerulean, what a wonderful word to describe his eyes. Great start. Author's Response: I knew the \"word lady\" would like that one!
Reviewer: ash
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Date: 01/26/06 - 07:38AM
Title: Coming to Terms
Very interesting. Hmmmm one of my fav pairings too. Me like! more more more!!!!
Author's Response: Mine too! They seem to fit, don\'t they?
Reviewer: SaraM
Anonymous
Date: 12/20/05 - 04:57PM
Title: Chapter One
Its reaalx a good story....When are the next chapters come out?? Im so excited to read them;) Please update soon:)
Author's Response: Very soon, I promise. The words are in my tape recorder just need to put them on paper.
Reviewer: Vegas Chick
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Date: 10/31/05 - 03:47PM
Title: Coming to Terms
WOW THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY!!! I WISH U HAD NEVER STOPPED CAUSE I REALLY LIKE IT AND HOPE THAT U WILL PLEASE WRITE MORE OR IF U HAVE A WEBSITE THAT HAS THIS STORY WITH MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE CAN U EMAIL IT TO ME???
Author's Response: Thank you. I am working on the next chapter. I hope to have it posted soon. There will be at least 5 more chapters. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Susan
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/05 - 07:48AM
Title: Chapter One
good start keep it going!
Author's Response: thank you - working on next chapter -should be up in the next few days
Reviewer: Katie
Anonymous
Date: 07/29/05 - 12:10AM
Title: Chapter One
how sweet. my lance pillow. wonder what it feels like. lol
keep going, its good!
Author's Response: I have always wondered that too LOL
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