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Reviewer: Dolphin_Lover
Signed
Date: 09/20/06 - 01:41AM
Title: Chapter 16
Great story. I just sat here for the past three hours reading all of what you have so far. I hope that you can update soon. I can't wait to read more and hope that it is soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 08/24/06 - 02:00AM
Title: Chapter 16
good story when will there be updates???????????
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I've actually been in the process this week writing down ideas on paper and hoping to get a new update as soon as I can. :)
Reviewer: Barb
Anonymous
Date: 03/03/06 - 06:45PM
Title: Chapter 15
Awe...JC needs to go out!
Reviewer: Beth
Anonymous
Date: 01/11/06 - 11:15PM
Title: Chapter 13
I love this story. I hope that you update very soon.
Reviewer: Barb
Anonymous
Date: 01/11/06 - 11:02PM
Title: Chapter 13
OOH...interesting....I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Barb
Anonymous
Date: 12/18/05 - 10:21PM
Title: Chapter 12
Awe...JC is such a good daddy!
Reviewer: Jocelyn
Anonymous
Date: 11/13/05 - 11:26PM
Title: Chapter 5
The story is okay so far. The only problem I have is that the little girl is already talking. She's only 11 months old (from my understanding). At that age, babies are barely walking, let alone talking. It's really unrealistic for an 11 month old to be speaking coherently. Other than that, good job so far.
Author's Response: Yes I noticed that recently once I looked it up and haven't really been giving her any other words to say but as far as 'no' since it's one syllable. But yeah thanks for pointing it out.
Reviewer: Beth
Anonymous
Date: 11/09/05 - 03:31PM
Title: Chapter 11
I liked this chapter. I hope that Carly gets her like together. Update soon!
Reviewer: marie
Anonymous
Date: 11/08/05 - 11:06PM
Title: Chapter 11
awesome update...i really hope that carly gets her stuff straight so she can gain custody back for savannah...update soon
Reviewer: Barb
Anonymous
Date: 11/08/05 - 01:10AM
Title: Chapter 11
AWE! JC is an awesome dad! I hope Carly can get her stuff straight!!
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