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Reviewer: Christina
Anonymous
Date: 09/06/05 - 12:34PM
Title: Sleeping With The Light On
Well well, Miss Hollie. Very powerful indeed. It's so very tempting to have a massive explosion mark the end of a relationship rather than the general petering out of one. I also liked how they didn't fall into each other's arms at the end of the story, but at the same time that totally sucked because I'm a romantic that wants all right in the world ;) lol Wonderful, as usual!
Author's Response: Why thank you, Miss Christina :o)
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 09/05/05 - 07:42PM
Title: Sleeping With The Light On
Aww. That story was very endearing. I enjoyed it very much!
Author's Response: Glad to hear it, thank you!
Reviewer: WastedHeadspace
Signed
Date: 09/05/05 - 06:46PM
Title: Sleeping With The Light On
Me like, very much. It strikes me as very real; you're right, not all relationships end in an explosion, and I think fiction writers, including myself, fall into that trap too often. Not every relationship is meant to be, and I like how you had Alex feeling sad that it was over and even yearning for Justin a little bit, but still accepting that it had ended.
Good job, my dear.
Author's Response: *smooch*
Reviewer: nikkki G
Anonymous
Date: 09/05/05 - 05:05PM
Title: Sleeping With The Light On
Awwww, kinda sad but lookin forward to more so please update soon, thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: see previous response *lol*
Reviewer: nikkki G
Anonymous
Date: 09/05/05 - 05:03PM
Title: Sleeping With The Light On
Awwww, kinda sad but lookin forward to more so please update soon, thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Miss Nik :o)
Reviewer: Bunny
Signed
Date: 09/05/05 - 04:52PM
Title: Sleeping With The Light On
Wow. I just love the way you write, girl. Will you be updating this again, or does it end there? :) Well, anyway, it was awesome. I could totally see everything moving. And, that whole moment with her and Justin, when she was leaving, totally put a smile on my face because I know exactly how that feels. Great job! *Hayley Jane
Author's Response: Aww, thank you :o) I just wanted to write a break up that wasn't all explosions and huge fights for a change!! I wasn't planning on adding any more to this, but I might toy with the idea of doing Justin's perspective
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