Reviewer: Morgan
Anonymous
Date: 09/11/05 - 04:41PM
Title: With Shadows In strobe Lights
Aww that was so sweet, I hope they get back together.
Author's Response: Well... you never can tell, can you? *lol* Thanks for the review :o)
Reviewer: Kenz
Anonymous
Date: 09/11/05 - 04:29PM
Title: With Shadows In strobe Lights
...and I forgot to say...extra points for the Title. I noticed on your LJ that you were listening to Knutsford City Limits. Inspirational, isn't he? Hehehe.
Author's Response: Inspirational? Yes, you could say Rob is inspirational!!!!
Reviewer: Kenz
Anonymous
Date: 09/11/05 - 04:24PM
Title: With Shadows In strobe Lights
Ah, wonderful as usual. Justin's insight into the relationship and breakup was interesting and added a new twist to the story. The differing observations and takes on things like the 'us' box were really cool; I like how you showed that one person's insult is another person's olive branch.
You dealt with the breakup in a really realistic way; he was obviously feeling something like sadness after it, but he wasn't, as you said, sleeping on dirty sheets so he could still smell her on them. Very realistic and very cool, Hols.
Job well done.
Author's Response: Well it would just be really really gross if he did that. Dirty sheets are stinky!!!
