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Reviewer: mimi
Anonymous
Date: 06/29/06 - 10:02AM
Title: This is Where it Stops
I'm so intrigued by this story & hopw that you update it soon. I can't help but wonder what those 3 words were. Lydia's mother is such a sad person...she pick's a man over her child & yet still makes the child feel worthless to better herself.
Reviewer: Amy A
Anonymous
Date: 01/08/06 - 04:22PM
Title: This is Where it Stops
I just started reading your story and i love it. I love the idea, the characters and the way you have written it especially as it brings out emotion. I sympathise so much with Justin and Lydia. Update soon! P.s
what were the three words I love you? See you later? that was beautiful? I'm dying to know. xxx
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 01/08/06 - 04:17PM
Title: This is Where it Stops
Ok ditto on the tearing up thing. I found it very endearing. Especially the holding hands part.
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 01/08/06 - 08:34AM
Title: This is Where it Stops
Ditto with the tearing up. It seemed so... real. And that's a fantastic talent to have as a writer, I commend you!. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great compliment. I really don't know where this story comes from. I usually write fluffy romance fics, with a happy Justin and a sassy protagonist. But these characters are dark and sad, but still sort of hopeful. The thing I was most worried about was making their emotions and reactions to each other seem real. So thanks for telling me that!
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 01/08/06 - 05:24AM
Title: This is Where it Stops
I loved this chapter. It was enchanting, mysterious, intriguing. I even teared up at the shower scene. What were the three words? You have to update soon. Fabulous chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks once again. I think this story will have only one more chapter. Hopefully I'll have that up by next weekend. Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 01/01/06 - 10:03PM
Title: This is What Happens Next
Wow, I like this story. Update soon.
Reviewer: Beth
Anonymous
Date: 01/01/06 - 06:25PM
Title: This is What Happens Next
I like this story. Very different from all the other stories I have rad. I hope that you will update this story very soon. Good luck with the writing.
Author's Response: Thanks. I sometimes like to challenge myself by writing something completely different from what I usually do. When I first started writing this story, I was working on Send Me an Angel at the same time. It was really hard trying to write something relatively light and sweet while doing something kind of dark. So I dropped this one for a while. But now that I'm back in the frame of mind for it, hopefully my updates will come quicker. Wow. I love to ramble on. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 01/01/06 - 05:49PM
Title: This is What Happens Next
I just wanted to let you know that I'm still reading and I want to see where this goes.
Author's Response: What's up, girl? Hope you had a happy holiday. I know I left this story hanging for the longest time. Thanks for giving it another read.
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 01/01/06 - 01:11PM
Title: This is What Happens Next
I like thins story. A LOT. It's very unique and has a very interesting back story. Can't wait to see how this turns out!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading this. I like to write romantic comedies, but once in a while I get an idea for something a little different and I'm never sure if anyone will read it or not. Thanks for giving this a try.
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
Anonymous
Date: 01/01/06 - 04:18AM
Title: This is What Happens Next
i like this so far. very original, and definitely a change of pace and tone from your other stories...i like these two characters already.... hope you'll continue! :)
Author's Response: Hey,
Thanks for giving this a try. I started this story a long time ago and had no idea what I wanted to do with it. Then I just sat down last night and started typing and it just poured out. I feel like a complete punk because, parts of it actually made me cry and I'm the one that's writing it. Anyway. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I think this story will only have three or four chapters and now that I've got a better idea of how I want it to go, it shouldn't take me so long to udate it.
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