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Reviewer: stimble
Signed
Date: 10/19/05 - 03:19AM
Title: Made it
Wow, this first chapter thing scared me because it sounded A LOT like my story. and yeah....but i read more chapters and i became less scared......so yeah... just before you post a chapter proof read it and make sure it all sounds right because it is a little bit hard to follow. And if a story is hard to follow then readers are turned off. Just some friendly advice. Keep up your hard work.
-L
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/05 - 04:02AM
Title: Justin explains it all... to andrea..
*Claps* Loved the new chapters =D
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 10/17/05 - 04:09PM
Title: Rainy Days and comfort foods...
I'm hooked on this story, please post more soon!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 10/17/05 - 04:01PM
Title: Clarity doesnt include everything
I'm loving this story. =D
I hope JC and andrea gets together. LOL
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 10/16/05 - 03:06AM
Title: Things get alittle werid
Ooh do I sense a love triangle?
Reviewer: Maureen
Anonymous
Date: 10/15/05 - 10:05PM
Title: Meeting with Justin, OH BOY!
I love the story so far, but you need to do some spell and grammar check. can't wait for more
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 10/15/05 - 09:34PM
Title: Meeting with Justin, OH BOY!
Ok somebody's a crazy bitch.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 10/15/05 - 03:23AM
Title: Cookies...
Andrea and JC are so cute together.
Author's Response: Arent they though. lol
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 10/14/05 - 09:18PM
Title: First meetings
I like it. I'm adding to my favorites.
Author's Response: thanks! :)
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