Reviewer: stimbleSignedDate: 10/19/05 - 03:19AM
Title: Made it
Wow, this first chapter thing scared me because it sounded A LOT like my story. and yeah....but i read more chapters and i became less scared......so yeah... just before you post a chapter proof read it and make sure it all sounds right because it is a little bit hard to follow. And if a story is hard to follow then readers are turned off. Just some friendly advice. Keep up your hard work.
-L