Tonya, you should make this a chapter story.. there is so much more to be added here. it's awesome it really is.. but i think it's more of a long story than a short story. :P

Author's Response: I've been seriously considering turning it into a short story series of sorts. lol Because honestly, after writing it, I'm like you, there are still so many unanswered questions and so many different ways this story could go. After seeing your comments here, I'm thinking the series will be a reality instead of a thought very soon! Keep an eye out for more! =D And thanks for your comments. I really appreciate them!