So, here's the deal. After attempting to write a second chapter to this baby, I realized that the first chapter was not how I wanted things to go. I decided (since its still in its beginning stages) that I would go ahead and rework the first chapter to fit the story I had in mind. So that's what's happened. Hopefully, it won't take long for me to get the next chapter out!

 Also, as always, feedback is encouraged and greatly appreciated! Thanks!