Comments For Biker Boy(s)
treasure (Signed) on Mar 23, 2009 01:38 am (Part Three: II)
God I hope nothing happens to him. I'm have this bad feeling that somethings gonna happen to him.



MochaB (Signed) on Oct 04, 2008 10:17 pm (Part Three: II)

oh. my. freaking. gosh.
i think i'm about to pass out over here. that was...sexy doesn't even do it justice! ohmygoshohmygoshOHMYGOOOSHHELLYES!!!! i don't even know what to say to this! the mirror?!?! *thud* and all this swirl talk?!?! *double thud!* haha. oh gosh...i am most definitely going to hate to see this end. that was just...on fire. i love that he shows her his sweet side, but he still has his hard edge to him and takes control and was like "spead 'em" and i died. haha! oh gosh rough justin...that's my stuff. ok i'm shutting up now. haha. update soon!! :o)



Author's Response: hahahaha....oh man, I love when you guys freak out over those scenes. That means it did its job. hehehe. And yes, the mirror was essential to increase the intensity between those two. :)  Ah yes, rough Justin is indeed hot with his fine self. I know what you mean. And well, he does have his hard edge. It's only that because it's Bri, he makes an effort to show his softer side. I wish I could make this a long too because I could see it having a nice little storyline but I'm hoping I can get everything in with the remaining updates. Thank a mill for reading and reviewing girl. I always love to read you guys thoughs. I'll update soon.



alimera (Signed) on Oct 04, 2008 11:37 am (Part Three: II)
Cute...I hope he's serious about keeping safe! Update again soon girlie.

Author's Response: Yeh I know right? We'll see how it ends. Thanks a lot for the feedback. :)



DeadandGone (Signed) on Oct 03, 2008 02:51 pm (Part Three: II)

Yes! Yes! Yes and a thousand times yes lol. It was about damn time he tap that, and he ( you) did not disappoint one bit. I love the swirl lol. Amazing as always Donna! 

Ha I have perfect timing indeed! 



Author's Response: Aw shuks, thanks a mill. I'm happy you guys liked their little love-making because I had to rewrite some parts to get it out just right so I'm happy it worked. :) I'll update soon.



MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 03, 2008 09:39 am (Part Three: II)
*dies* The mirror? Oh my God. Oh my God. Oh my God. Seriously. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yes! I take it you enjoyed it? hehe. Thanks for the feedback. I'll update soon. :)



SJane (Signed) on Oct 03, 2008 04:01 am (Part Three: II)
oh man if he was a craving i had i would satisfy and induldge in it all day every day lol

Author's Response: I know right? me too. lol. Thanks for the feedback. :)



SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 03, 2008 01:48 am (Part Three: II)
OMG D, just...OMFG. That was...just...damn. Can you tell that I am speechless right now. Girl, that was SO FUCKING hot and delicious and just sensual and sexy and...whew! I'm hot right now girl and wishing that Biker!J was on his way right now to my dorm room because that was off the chain girl. And in front of the mirror from behind too?!! Yeah, this chapter was the biz-ness.

I'm wondering how them being "together" is going to change the dynamic of him being in his crew and all that comes with it. But I can't wait to read more girlie, esp. if I get to have hot sex like that in the next few chapters (haha). Great job love!

Author's Response: Lmao...haha Bri you're killing me with this review. :-D. Yeah, well you know, I had to make it as hot as possible without being over the top because we both know those two have enough built up tension between them. The thought of the mirror was last minute for me. I just figured he, that would be pretty sexy in there so I did it. lol Glad it worked out. hehe. I kind of wish I could make this one longer. It could be a good little tale but I just have so many updates. *sigh*. Still glad you enjoyed it. I'll update soon. Thanks. :)



Schnessa (Signed) on Oct 03, 2008 01:31 am (Part Three: II)
I'm so in love with this story it's insane....You are just banoodles!! And that's a good thing! Do your thang with your biker boy story because you are definitely one of my inspirations! MUAH

Author's Response: hehehe really happy you like it. and Gurl your story is great too! I love biker!j he's hot! I'll update soon. thanks for the feedback.





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